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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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“Eww.” She frowned. “I so do not want to think about my sister getting it on with that mullet-wearing ***** with a strap-on buckled around her waist.”
“I don’t know why you’re getting all grossed out. As I recall, you’ve had a past that included some ***** toys and I believe one of them came with a strap.”
Bette smirked. “That’s different.”
“Hey, I was a straight woman until I met you.” Sitting there with hot looking bed hair and wearing that ***** robe with next to nothing under it had Tina thinking that Bette sure looked like a cool, tall glass of water. She gave her the once-over. “All it takes is the right woman.”
Bette smiled and sipped from her cup.
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Asian Inspirations was an airy warehouse size furniture store filled with a few pieces spread throughout the space. The whole effect was the epitome of minimalism and it played to the sensibilities of Tina and Bette. There were examples of bedroom, dining and living room suites with one or two oversized armoires, chests, and dressers. There were Japanese Kotatsu tables, Indian jali bookcases, and antique red lacquered Chinese hope chests. Bette glanced around the store, finding many of the items appealing.
“Look, there it is.” Tina grabbed Bette’s hand and guided her to the bed just as the salesman appeared from nowhere.
“Good afternoon ladies. My name is Junichi Narahara.” He nodded his head imperceptibly. “Is there anything I can assist you with today?”
“Yeah, this bed. We’re interested in it.”
“Oh, yes. This is one of our finest pieces. The frame is solid mahogany taken from a certified sustainably-harvested forest. This means that the craftsperson did not use old growth wood, destroying our much needed forests…”
“Right, can we take a look,” Bette cut him off.
“Of course. Well, let’s see. There is no need for a box spring. The solid mahogany and rosewood slats are super strong. The stain used on this particular product is the very best out there at this time.”
Bette sat on the bed and bounced lightly. “I like it. It’s comfortable.” She reached across and moved one of the two separate headboards up and down and then tilted them forward and back. She nodded her approval.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!