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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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“Go ahead and stretch out. Lie in it and tell me that it’s not the best.” Tina stood next to Mr. Narahara and watched as Bette pulled her legs up and stretched out on the bed. Tina smiled warmly at her and the salesman seemed to notice for the first time that these two women weren’t in there to buy a gift for their ailing grandmother.
“Oh,” he started suggestively. “Why don’t you go ahead and dive in? You can only imagine how it feels to press against it and feel the warmth just envelope you.” Narahara was looking at either the bed or Bette, Tina wasn’t quite sure.
“Come here, Tina. Lie down.”
Tina walked to the other side and fell easily into the bed. “Ahh, that is nice.”
“Yes, yes, it is. Don’t you just want to sink in there? Go deeper and deeper.”
“Uh-huh,” Tina responded automatically. Narahara might not be talking about Bette, but Tina was definitely thinking about her.
“I’m telling you that you will be so satisfied after one night that you won’t want to get up. You’ll feel exhilarated in the a.m.”
“I believe it,” she said.
Bette sat up, looked at the two of them, and shook her head. “We’ll take it.”
“Great, great. You won’t be sorry.”
Bette stood and said, “First, do you have this bed in stock?”
“We sure do. We have two left in our warehouse.”
“We live in West Hollywood. How soon can we get it delivered? We’d like to get it today.”
“Oh, that’s impossible. I’m the only one in the showroom and we have no trucks available or deliverymen on staff today.”
“Tomorrow?”
“The soonest I can get it out to you is later in the week. We only do deliveries on Saturday and I’m afraid you missed the one for yesterday.”
“Mr. Narahara,” Bette began. “May I call you Junichi?”
“Yes.”
Bette had put on her bargaining hat and Tina sat up and watched the scene unfold. “Junichi,” she said as she patted his hand. “We really want this bed, but we don’t have to get it here. We’re ready to buy this bed today and we’re very much aware of the price. Along with the bed, we were going to buy a Tempur Pedic mattress. We can walk out of here today with nothing and you lose what potentially would be a sizeable commission or you figure out how you can get that bed to us by 5:00pm tomorrow and have two very happy people who would undoubtedly become returning customers to your fine store. I’ll let you decide what the best alternative is for you.” Bette clasped her hands in front of her face, bouncing her thumbs lightly against her lips while Narahara made his decision.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!