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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Tina’s eyes crossed when Bette’s mouth was on her again. “Kill me now.” She moaned and tenderly ran her hand through Bette’s hair.
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Two Weeks Later
Bette was sitting in her office reading another memo from the Board requesting an update on upcoming exhibitions. She had just met with them last week and had given them the latest information. She felt like saying, ‘***** you. I’m outta here,’ but her work ethic wouldn’t allow it. Her head was pounding and she didn’t know why. She hadn’t had much sleep the night before, but she hadn’t had much in close to fourteen days. She and Tina had been insatiable. The ***** had never, ever been this good. And it wasn’t just after-work arousal, but during the day, Tina would call to say something suggestive, make a request for the night, drive her wild. Bette loved it. She felt free and alive. Today, though, she couldn’t hear herself think. The pounding was more than just in her head. She buzzed for James who came in directly.
“James, what the ***** is going on out there?”
“The movers are here.”
Bette blinked, not understanding.
“Adam’s Fine Art Movers are packing up the ‘Provocations’ exhibit for shipping. Last night was the last night of the show, Bette. Remember?”
“Oh, yes.” After the initial month of the run, ‘Provocations’ had become another exhibit in a line of exhibits that had come in and out of the museum. Funny that. She had worked so hard to get it; it had cost her so much to display it; now she barely noticed it when she walked into the building. “How’s it going?”
“They’re practically finished and the carpentry crew should be here late this morning to break the installation down.”
Bette tilted her head; her lower lip was clutched by her upper teeth giving her the look of an overbite. She said, “The carpenters are coming.”
“Yeah, I arranged for parking in the garage for them. Candace Jewell and her crew will arrive around 11-11:30. Do you want me to let you know when she’s here?”
“No,” she nearly yelled at him. She softened. “No, James. In fact, I’m going to be tied up with things in here all day. If you could order an early lunch for me and bring it in, that would be great. I don’t want to be disturbed for any reason whatsoever. If anyone needs help either you or Annie take care of it. Not me, not today.”
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!