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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Bette’s hands rubbed Tina’s thighs, squeezed her *****, pushed down on her abdomen the way Tina liked it, clutched her *****. Tina’s nipples were still so very hard and Bette knew she liked a little bit of roughness at this point in their lovemaking. She paid close attention to her nipples, massaging each one between her forefinger and thumb, sometimes pinching it hard. She smiled into Tina’s wetness when she heard Tina grunt in response. Bette used her other hand to open Tina again. Her tongue moved up and down the length of her. She sucked Tina’s throbbing clitoris into her mouth, using her lower lip to extract every bit of excitement from her sensitized core. “Oh, Bette. Oh, Bette. Bette. Oh, oh, oh. Oh, God, Bette.” Tina sighed deeply, her head tossed and turned and her bent legs began to shake as she watched Bette’s head move in a tight circular motion between her legs. Suddenly, her left leg straightened and Bette knew that Tina was there. She slipped one finger inside of her and pushed deep and then stilled. Bette closed her eyes as she lapped at Tina’s ***** and swam in the juices that seemed to be flowing non-stop. Tina tightened around Bette’s finger, then she was up, sitting, grabbing Bette’s head, pushing it hard into her, then pushing her entire body away from her lover. She grabbed Bette under her arms and pulled her up her body, kissing any and every part of her that she could reach. When they were finally face-to-face, Tina kissed her passionately. Bette’s face was wet with Tina and wet with tears. Pushing her hair out of the way, Bette stared into Tina’s eyes. “You are the best thing about my life.”
Both women cried. They drifted off a few minutes later, but Tina was awakened by something warm and wet between her legs. She opened an eye to see Bette about one inch from her dark blonde triangle pouring wine a tiny bit at a time onto her. “Baby, you’d better be careful. You don’t want to ruin the sheets.”
“Don’t move. No one will be hurt.” These were 1000 thread Egyptian cotton sheets and they were Bette’s favorite linens, but right then, she was concentrating on her number one favorite of favorites. “I don’t want to waste one trickle of this wine, so I’m going to have to make sure I drink every tiny drop. Be still. I don’t want to miss any.”
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!