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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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“Jeez, Bette. I can’t believe how wet you are.”
“Gimme another, Tee. One more.”
“Are you sure? I don’t want to hurt you.”
“I need it baby. More. Just more.”
Tina pushed a third finger inside of her and Bette groaned, grunted, moaned, sighed as those three fingers moved her closer and closer to the edge. Bette was never one to talk in bed. She seemed to get lost in the sensations, unable to come up with words, but her face showed all the pleasure and delight of Tina’s touch. Her mouth was parted, her upper lip curled, her tongue sliding across her lips and she wore a look of utter surrender and sheer passion
It was Tina who needed more. She needed to know that Bette was hers. “Say my name,” Tina pleaded. “Say it.”
“Tina. I love you, baby. I love you, Tee.”
Tina trembled when she heard the yearning in Bette’s voice. She was a teetering on the edge, moments from submitting completely to Bette’s expert fingers. Tina pushed in a little harder and faster as she fell.
“Ah. Oh, yes. Yes. Bette. *****. Baby, yeah.”
Bette’s fingers didn’t stop until she too went rigid. The sound of Tina’s fingers inside of her moving in and out rapidly, the sound of Tina coming, her own panting and grunting were the encouragement Bette needed to join her partner. Her ***** tore through her. As always, Tina was still falling when Bette rose to meet with her. Bette climbed to her peak quickly and cried out in delicious helplessness. She couldn’t have stopped it if she had tried. Tina pulled everything from her. Bette felt her ***** pulsing as the ***** showed no intentions of subsiding. Tina’s fingers kept moving inside of Bette, tickling the walls. Tina’s head dropped to Bette’s ***** and sucked her nipple hard bringing forth a loud groan from Bette. Finally, she grabbed Tina’s hand and stopped all movement. Tina smiled down at her and Bette was able to catch her off guard. Tina was now on her back and Bette glided down her slick body, pushed her legs open and dove in. This time she was going to stay right where she was until she had finished her off.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!