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You Found Me Chapter 163

Ooooooohhhhhhhh fffffuuuckkk they scream……Shane rides them both out until the feeling stops..
Mmmmmm Fuck….Carmen says out of breath…. Shane kisses her again…thank you baby I needed that..
You’re welcome anytime… she smiles..
So no luck?
Shane was putting her pants back on. no.. sounding disappointed.
Well I haven’t seen her here. But the night’s still young.
Mmm yes it is…Shane laughs because she knew they would have more later tonight when they got home.
Ok I’m just going to motioning to her face clean up, Alice will hound me for having fun while on a mission.
Carmen laughs yeah well I don’t want anyone smelling me but you so yes please do go wash your face I have to get back to work. Just be careful ok.
I will she kisses her one last time and they part.
Where you been? Alice hollers
I went to spend Carmen’s break with her.
Alice gets this look…uhuhhhh…I know that look !…you’re not fooling me one bit Shaney!…She gave you some!…
What? NO!… Shane held her smile best she could.
Jesus Shane! Can’t you hold it together just for one night.. Focus. We made a pact, no fun until the job’s done…why is it so hard for you to do?
Shane looks over at Carmen and smiles when she looks back at her.. ouch.. Shane rubs her shin. Jesus Alice.. just look at her.. I can’t resist.. Shane moved her leg before Alice kicks her again. Ok..I’ll stop looking.
Fine!
Fine.
Dana comes back to the table with drinks.. ok guys 12 o’clock by the bar.
They look… well well look what the cat dragged in…Alice says…they down their drinks and stand.
All for one and one for all Alice says looking at them.
Yep Shane says…
Count me in too Dana says.. they had talked over their plan before hand and now are all in agreement to carry it out.
Go Dana Alice says..
Dana walks from the table trying to walk seductively but looked more like a moose trying to walk in high heels..
What is she doing? Shane asks..
Fuck if I know… Alice replies
Bobbie looks over her shoulder seeing Dana walking towards her like she was drunk.. Bobbie never had the pleasure of getting Dana alone and always wanted to but she was so in tight with Alice she never bothered but this looked promising..
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I was almost closing my tablet and hooray i got the notification you posted a new chapter!
You know how i love your story and i could’nt resist to read before going to sleep:partysmilie
Yes, Bobbie did get what she deserved, i hope she underststands that she is not wanted around LA and my favourite couple and move away as far as possible.
Sorry to hear that you had to work so much, i do hope you have a few days free now.
Thanks for the update!
Thank you for staying up and reading….and yeah this week will be a shorter one Now go to bed!
Ok i did go to bed, had a good sleep, only way to short, just like your chapter. Can we expect a new steamy update with our beloved couple and no i don’t have it about Shane & Carmen :) allthough that was Hot too.
Enjoy your free days!
At work now lol…glad you got some sleep. And yeah have a few steamy chapters…and will post soon….and yeah Shane and Carmen are good but like my BnT sex better..that i,’m not sure where it came from …lol wife didn’t care for it either…She proof reads for me and she sorta glaced past it ..lol…she said it was OK but not her thing…lol..
If you need someone to proof read, i will happily volunteer! ;)
Punctuation is vital!!!! I can’t get through your paragraphs and your sentences are so tangled, and guide me no where because I cannot follow them. Please look up how to punctuate, and get your verb tenses sorted. It’s clear you have an enthusiasm for writing, obvious that you love your characters – all things that are important- but you’re killing us, and our enjoyment of what you’re trying to portray, with your mangled manuscripts.
Not to be too harsh, but really . . .
LOL…Bibi28 you crack me up….Let me clarify, My wife has a law degree and can write properly but she makes very minimal changes to my story. She leaves my style and thoughts alone.
TINA should’ve had the honor of putting the boots to BOBBIE but it got done and the message was recieved,LEAVE TOWN.thanks
Well Tina does have to have a talk with her when she gets back so we will see what Tina says….
I need more. It have been awhile. I think I need daily updates. I am having withdrawal symptoms. ★★
lol…Withdrawals? I’m sorry.. I will try and post again Thursday…And I have some writing to do before you guys get caught up to me…
Thanks and welcome back! I sure missed this amazing story! Yes, Bobbie got her due but I wanted Bette and Tina to also deal with her ass! PPS
Bette had her say and Tina has yet to have her day. It’s coming but not in violence like the approach the girls took. Thank you for missing me… still working night shifts?
So glad you updated. I enjoy this story a lot, thanks. Was glad to see Bobbie get told
WOW!
Blackbird that was harsh, you just lost a supporter of your stories.
Keep it up BnT