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You Found Me Chapter 163

Hiiiii… Dana says smiling at Bobbie..
Had a few have you, Dana?
No! What makes you thing that?
Bobbie smirks thinking Dana was drunk but really she was just Dana…
What will you have?
A screw against the wall. Looking dead in Bobbies eye… Alice had rehearsed this with Dana. She then takes a seat while Bobbie ordered.. So Bobbie where have you been? I miss you at work. Her drink was put in front of her. She took small sips.
Well whatever she was doing Bobby’s falling for it.. Shane says..
Yeah she is… sounding jealous.
Remember she’s just acting..
Yeah I know… but then she sees Bobbie put her hand on Dana’s thigh…that’s it!
Shane grabs her. Whoa… woman you’re going to blow her cover…wait until we get her outside.
They watch and Bobbie is leaning in whispering to Dana.
You want to get out of here Dana? You can come back to my place..
I don’t know about that..
Why I promise I won’t try nothing.. you can just sleep it off.. here finish your drink..
Dana downs it only so they can move this along she didn’t like Bobbie touching her. Ok let’s go. This time Dana stood and was a little drunk. Two big drinks back to back was a lot for little old Dana to handle.
Is she drunk? Alice asks
Looks like it.. what did she drink over here before she left.
Alice picks up her glass and smell..
Jack!
What?
Oh Dana… Alice knew she had too much because she already knew what she had Bobbie to get her. Shit let’s go… they quickly follow them outside..
Outside.. Which way Alice looks around.. there she sees them walking Dana was having trouble. But Bobbie has her arm around her guiding her to her car.
Hey fat ass! Where you think you’re going? Alice hollers a few feet away.
Bobbie stops and turns them around. Well well…. If it isn’t big mouth Alice… Shane had went around behind them.
Dana come here.. Dana starts but Bobbie holds her.
She’s with me for the night you can have her after I’m done with her.
Dana squirms to get out of her grasp. She gets somewhat loose enough to ball her fist and punch her in the face. Dana has a great right hook don’t you think Bobbie?
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I was almost closing my tablet and hooray i got the notification you posted a new chapter!
You know how i love your story and i could’nt resist to read before going to sleep:partysmilie
Yes, Bobbie did get what she deserved, i hope she underststands that she is not wanted around LA and my favourite couple and move away as far as possible.
Sorry to hear that you had to work so much, i do hope you have a few days free now.
Thanks for the update!
Thank you for staying up and reading….and yeah this week will be a shorter one Now go to bed!
Ok i did go to bed, had a good sleep, only way to short, just like your chapter. Can we expect a new steamy update with our beloved couple and no i don’t have it about Shane & Carmen :) allthough that was Hot too.
Enjoy your free days!
At work now lol…glad you got some sleep. And yeah have a few steamy chapters…and will post soon….and yeah Shane and Carmen are good but like my BnT sex better..that i,’m not sure where it came from …lol wife didn’t care for it either…She proof reads for me and she sorta glaced past it ..lol…she said it was OK but not her thing…lol..
If you need someone to proof read, i will happily volunteer! ;)
Punctuation is vital!!!! I can’t get through your paragraphs and your sentences are so tangled, and guide me no where because I cannot follow them. Please look up how to punctuate, and get your verb tenses sorted. It’s clear you have an enthusiasm for writing, obvious that you love your characters – all things that are important- but you’re killing us, and our enjoyment of what you’re trying to portray, with your mangled manuscripts.
Not to be too harsh, but really . . .
LOL…Bibi28 you crack me up….Let me clarify, My wife has a law degree and can write properly but she makes very minimal changes to my story. She leaves my style and thoughts alone.
TINA should’ve had the honor of putting the boots to BOBBIE but it got done and the message was recieved,LEAVE TOWN.thanks
Well Tina does have to have a talk with her when she gets back so we will see what Tina says….
I need more. It have been awhile. I think I need daily updates. I am having withdrawal symptoms. ★★
lol…Withdrawals? I’m sorry.. I will try and post again Thursday…And I have some writing to do before you guys get caught up to me…
Thanks and welcome back! I sure missed this amazing story! Yes, Bobbie got her due but I wanted Bette and Tina to also deal with her ass! PPS
Bette had her say and Tina has yet to have her day. It’s coming but not in violence like the approach the girls took. Thank you for missing me… still working night shifts?
So glad you updated. I enjoy this story a lot, thanks. Was glad to see Bobbie get told
WOW!
Blackbird that was harsh, you just lost a supporter of your stories.
Keep it up BnT