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You (Part the Eighth)
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“Why are you doing this?” Dana asked tearfully. She wasn’t completely oblivious to the fact that what Alice was saying was all true, but that didn’t make it feel any better.
“Because someone’s got to, and I’m your best friend. If I don’t do it, nobody will. And I’m not gonna let you treat me like shit too.” Dana refused to meet her eyes, playing with the tie on her robe instead. Finally, she looked up at Alice and nodded her head ever so slightly.
“You should get out of bed, Dane. There’s no reason for you to be laying around all day, you know? I’ve been talking to your doctors, and I know you feel nauseated, but you’re not bedridden. I think we should go see the B-52’s tonight.” Alice was glad to see Dana smile at this. She was honestly a little worried for having unloaded on her like that. Granted, it had to be done, but she couldn’t help but feel like she’d been a little harsh, especially seeing the tears that Dana hadn’t allowed herself to shed yet.
“Hey,” she murmured, walking over and pulling Dana into a hug. “I’m sorry, sweetie. I know you don’t have any fucking clue how to feel. I’m sorry I got upset.”
Dana just shook her head and pulled Alice in closer. “No, you were right, I’ve become some kind of monster or something. I guess it was easier to feel sorry for myself than to fight it, you know?” She pulled back far enough that Alice could see her smile. “And I like the B-52’s. If you call Kit for me, I’ll go with you.”
“Sweet. Yeah, I’ll have her rope off a little special section for us. And Dana? I’m gonna take care of you. I’m gonna make sure you’re safe. I promise.”
She’d been about to say more, but wasn’t exactly able to as Dana pulled her in for a kiss. It surprised the hell out of Alice, mostly because it wasn’t like any of the other times they’d done this. It seemed more…yearning, somehow, as if Dana was seeking reassurance from Alice’s mouth or something, kissing her deeper and harder and longer than she ever had before. Not that she minded, exactly, it just struck her as weird. Even through her shock, she was able to recognize that she couldn’t let this go on, since neither of them were ready for a step like this so soon. So, although it was the last thing she wanted to do, Alice pulled back so she could hug Dana without the fear of being kissed again.
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Great job, the connection is real! Gives me hope for happy endings.
WOW muted im so very proud of you at this moment! I know that had to be tough to write,but you did it and it was the best update! Im sorry i havent been around ,wishing i was there for you to write this chapter.HUGS and just remember its almost 6 months!! Love ya!!! PPS
Wow Temp this was really really good and im not just saying that i truly mean it.I know what its like to write your own experiences in your story its kinda like an outlet and I know it mustve really been hard for you to write this, especially since youve lived through it. I love the way you ended this chapter. We all have that friend like shane that seems to always be right when you dont want them to be LOL
Wow! This is beautifully written. I loved it. Alice verbiage always make me smile. More Please.
Phenomenal update. It broke my heart, and gave me hope all at the same time. You did a wonderful job, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can only imagine how difficult this was to write, with having your own experiences with cancer. For that I applaude you. Thank you very much for sharing. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. Sorry, but I don’t have any good ideas about the Foamcore Dana. Although, I always did have this picture of Alice playing “dress up” with Foamcore Dana. You know…Dana’s pants and shirt? That way it not only looked like Dana, but smelled like her too. Weird right? Wait a sec…that didn’t actually happen right? I seem to have a whole bunch of season 3 memory lapses. Oh well. :) Loved it.
This update brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely loved it! It’s all in the small gestures that emphasis the strong bong between these women (and ofcourse especially Dana and Alice). I was glad to see that Alice replaced Bette. And Alice comforting Dana at any time…they’re just meant to be. *sigh* And I also loved the fact that they went looking for Dana after Carmen’s remark. The original storyline will only fade more to the background from now on. And don’t be scared, you will do just fine on your own. You already did a superb job with this one!
I am totally loving this story!!!
So sweet!! i hope you have a happy ending tho..my hopes are so high lol:)
This is a beautiful story, no matter how you end it. Thank you.
Beautiful Simpy Beautiful….(And I hope all is well with you)
im really liking this story. like how it goes from what was actually happening int he series to your own interpretation of it.
Awesome story. I was so sad by the way things ended in S3 and you gave me hope…Hope for the Danish love to survive even in the worst moments…Please change the IC´s end.Give us Danish fans this happines.
I love love love, this story. It’s so interesting how you take the characters along season 3 but in a different way with alice and dana. I LOVE IT! I’ve had to catch up on the last couple chapters and i just want to read more and more. You’re doing a great job and this story has become one of my favorites. Can’t wait to see what happens next. gotta love the love…:)