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You (Part the Eighth)
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Alice stopped crying long enough to take Dana’s hand and whisper “Yeah.” Not entirely surprised that Alice had answered instead of Bette, Dana looked over at her and smiled, then closed her eyes again. “Come here,” she whispered, moving over a little to make room on the bed. Alice didn’t even pretend to hesitate as she crawled over, cradling Dana gently in her arms and stroking her face lightly as she finally surrendered to sleep. Alice followed not long afterwards, and they stayed that way for the rest of the party, not even waking up when the entire group gathered at the door to check on them, moving back to the patio after a few minutes, all smiles. Even Lara, who walked out there with Shane and Bette’s arms around her shoulders, had to smile at how utterly right it looked to see them together like that. Like Dana, she was finally able to relax for the first time in weeks.
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It was way too early to even think about being awake. Had to be, the sun wasn’t even fully up yet. But Alice was, shooting upright and saying Dana’s name breathlessly. She couldn’t remember the specifics of the nightmare, but from the way her heart was racing she guessed it must have been pretty bad. She tried to clear her head a little and get her bearings, but it was really tough to do with the nagging feeling that something was seriously wrong. It was scaring the fuck out of her and she didn’t want to call Dana in case her fears were confirmed. She realized that was probably stupid, but it didn’t change anything. Vowing to herself to call Dana later on, when she’d stopped being so damn anxious, she jumped in the shower so she’d be clean for the trip to the dump, the first step in the recovery of Foamcore Dana.
Across town, Non-Foamcore Dana bolted upright in agony. She hadn’t been expecting the pain to be so debilitating that it’d wake her up from a sound sleep. Lara wasn’t helping matters, either. Why did everyone seem to think that telling a cancer patient things were okay was going to work when it was more than obvious that things were not, in fact, okay?
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Great job, the connection is real! Gives me hope for happy endings.
WOW muted im so very proud of you at this moment! I know that had to be tough to write,but you did it and it was the best update! Im sorry i havent been around ,wishing i was there for you to write this chapter.HUGS and just remember its almost 6 months!! Love ya!!! PPS
Wow Temp this was really really good and im not just saying that i truly mean it.I know what its like to write your own experiences in your story its kinda like an outlet and I know it mustve really been hard for you to write this, especially since youve lived through it. I love the way you ended this chapter. We all have that friend like shane that seems to always be right when you dont want them to be LOL
Wow! This is beautifully written. I loved it. Alice verbiage always make me smile. More Please.
Phenomenal update. It broke my heart, and gave me hope all at the same time. You did a wonderful job, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can only imagine how difficult this was to write, with having your own experiences with cancer. For that I applaude you. Thank you very much for sharing. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. Sorry, but I don’t have any good ideas about the Foamcore Dana. Although, I always did have this picture of Alice playing “dress up” with Foamcore Dana. You know…Dana’s pants and shirt? That way it not only looked like Dana, but smelled like her too. Weird right? Wait a sec…that didn’t actually happen right? I seem to have a whole bunch of season 3 memory lapses. Oh well. :) Loved it.
This update brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely loved it! It’s all in the small gestures that emphasis the strong bong between these women (and ofcourse especially Dana and Alice). I was glad to see that Alice replaced Bette. And Alice comforting Dana at any time…they’re just meant to be. *sigh* And I also loved the fact that they went looking for Dana after Carmen’s remark. The original storyline will only fade more to the background from now on. And don’t be scared, you will do just fine on your own. You already did a superb job with this one!
I am totally loving this story!!!
So sweet!! i hope you have a happy ending tho..my hopes are so high lol:)
This is a beautiful story, no matter how you end it. Thank you.
Beautiful Simpy Beautiful….(And I hope all is well with you)
im really liking this story. like how it goes from what was actually happening int he series to your own interpretation of it.
Awesome story. I was so sad by the way things ended in S3 and you gave me hope…Hope for the Danish love to survive even in the worst moments…Please change the IC´s end.Give us Danish fans this happines.
I love love love, this story. It’s so interesting how you take the characters along season 3 but in a different way with alice and dana. I LOVE IT! I’ve had to catch up on the last couple chapters and i just want to read more and more. You’re doing a great job and this story has become one of my favorites. Can’t wait to see what happens next. gotta love the love…:)