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You (Part the Eighth)
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Back at the hospital, Dana’s chemo had ended and she and Lara were sitting with the doctor as she went on and on about the necessary precautions to take. Lara was trying to be supportive, and Dana did appreciate it, but she was in a fucking horrible mood and just wanted to go home. She hated that the cancer was making her into some kind of monster…of course, the doctors kept telling her that mood swings were normal. Hell, even Lara had heard that. But it wasn’t exactly a mood swing when it came to Lara, it was more of a permanent bitch session, and it made her feel ashamed. But the worst part of it was that she couldn’t seem to stop.
“When am I gonna lose my hair?” she couldn’t stop herself from asking.
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“Okay, is it just me or do you think it’s a little weird that Bette wants to throw her a chemo party?” Alice asked as she pulled into Shane and Jenny’s driveway, waving to Carmen on the patio as she did.
“It’s not weird, Al…she’s just trying to show Dana that we’re all here for her, you know? Although I do agree on the timing being a little off. I mean, she just got done this morning, didn’t she? I can’t see her being too peppy.” Shane realized she was still talking into the cell phone even though Alice had been standing beside her for most of the time she’d been talking. She hung up as she stood and pulled her friend into a hug.
“Yeah, I dunno. I think it’s just an excuse to get us all over there or something. Now that Tina’s out of town she probably feels better having us all over there.”
“Yeah, probably. Hey Al…you’re gonna be nice to Lara, right?” Carmen had to ask. She didn’t want to, but she also didn’t want a huge blowup scene. Alice just looked at her as if she’d grown two heads.
“Of course I am, Carmen. Yeah, right after Dana’s first chemo treatment I’m just going to get into a fight with her girlfriend.” It came out a little more angrily than she’d intended, and she smiled and shook her head, giving Carmen a quick hug.
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Great job, the connection is real! Gives me hope for happy endings.
WOW muted im so very proud of you at this moment! I know that had to be tough to write,but you did it and it was the best update! Im sorry i havent been around ,wishing i was there for you to write this chapter.HUGS and just remember its almost 6 months!! Love ya!!! PPS
Wow Temp this was really really good and im not just saying that i truly mean it.I know what its like to write your own experiences in your story its kinda like an outlet and I know it mustve really been hard for you to write this, especially since youve lived through it. I love the way you ended this chapter. We all have that friend like shane that seems to always be right when you dont want them to be LOL
Wow! This is beautifully written. I loved it. Alice verbiage always make me smile. More Please.
Phenomenal update. It broke my heart, and gave me hope all at the same time. You did a wonderful job, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can only imagine how difficult this was to write, with having your own experiences with cancer. For that I applaude you. Thank you very much for sharing. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. Sorry, but I don’t have any good ideas about the Foamcore Dana. Although, I always did have this picture of Alice playing “dress up” with Foamcore Dana. You know…Dana’s pants and shirt? That way it not only looked like Dana, but smelled like her too. Weird right? Wait a sec…that didn’t actually happen right? I seem to have a whole bunch of season 3 memory lapses. Oh well. :) Loved it.
This update brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely loved it! It’s all in the small gestures that emphasis the strong bong between these women (and ofcourse especially Dana and Alice). I was glad to see that Alice replaced Bette. And Alice comforting Dana at any time…they’re just meant to be. *sigh* And I also loved the fact that they went looking for Dana after Carmen’s remark. The original storyline will only fade more to the background from now on. And don’t be scared, you will do just fine on your own. You already did a superb job with this one!
I am totally loving this story!!!
So sweet!! i hope you have a happy ending tho..my hopes are so high lol:)
This is a beautiful story, no matter how you end it. Thank you.
Beautiful Simpy Beautiful….(And I hope all is well with you)
im really liking this story. like how it goes from what was actually happening int he series to your own interpretation of it.
Awesome story. I was so sad by the way things ended in S3 and you gave me hope…Hope for the Danish love to survive even in the worst moments…Please change the IC´s end.Give us Danish fans this happines.
I love love love, this story. It’s so interesting how you take the characters along season 3 but in a different way with alice and dana. I LOVE IT! I’ve had to catch up on the last couple chapters and i just want to read more and more. You’re doing a great job and this story has become one of my favorites. Can’t wait to see what happens next. gotta love the love…:)