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You (Part the Eighth)
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“Well, that’s a very good thing to hear,” a decidedly British accent piped up from just over the fence. “Get over here, Lara’s car just pulled up out front. Alice, you’re going to keep me company in the pool, aren’t you?” And sure enough, Helena was in a swimsuit, while Alice wasn’t.
“I don’t really think I’m dressed for hanging out in the pool, Helena. Sorry.” Alice smiled at Helena’s dejected expression and gestured to her dress, which was obviously not pool wear.
“You can use one of the floaty things, Al. I lay on them all the time while Angelica’s swimming with Tina,” Bette cut in, handing her a blue one over the fence. “Now get over here, we can’t have a party in two separate yards.”
“Fine, fine,” the three of them muttered, dutifully walking the whole 100 feet it took to get there. Bette had put Dana in one of the lawn chairs she’d had imported, and they each stopped to kiss her cheek and say hello before sitting down. She looked horribly exhausted, and it was pretty obvious that she was cold from the way she huddled into her sweater. She was happy to see everyone, though, and as Lara disappeared into the kitchen she even found herself smiling a little.
“Thanks for earlier,” she whispered to Alice, who was running her hands up and down Dana’s arms in an attempt to warm her up a little. The doctors had told her that Dana’d get cold a lot more easily, but she was surprised at how much she was shivering considering it was close to 85 degrees.
“Don’t worry about it,” she whispered back as she turned to the pool, catching Shane’s eyes as she turned away and shaking her head at the smirk her friend was currently sporting at seeing the two of them interact.
Helena, meanwhile, was trying to come up with a plan to actually get Alice into the pool and onto the floaty thing without soaking her dress. “Leave it to you to wear white to a pool party,” she laughed as Alice tried to crawl onto the thing.
“Fuck you, okay? You and your insatiable love of water are the only reasons I’m even attempting this instead of sitting on the patio like a normal person –"
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Great job, the connection is real! Gives me hope for happy endings.
WOW muted im so very proud of you at this moment! I know that had to be tough to write,but you did it and it was the best update! Im sorry i havent been around ,wishing i was there for you to write this chapter.HUGS and just remember its almost 6 months!! Love ya!!! PPS
Wow Temp this was really really good and im not just saying that i truly mean it.I know what its like to write your own experiences in your story its kinda like an outlet and I know it mustve really been hard for you to write this, especially since youve lived through it. I love the way you ended this chapter. We all have that friend like shane that seems to always be right when you dont want them to be LOL
Wow! This is beautifully written. I loved it. Alice verbiage always make me smile. More Please.
Phenomenal update. It broke my heart, and gave me hope all at the same time. You did a wonderful job, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can only imagine how difficult this was to write, with having your own experiences with cancer. For that I applaude you. Thank you very much for sharing. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. Sorry, but I don’t have any good ideas about the Foamcore Dana. Although, I always did have this picture of Alice playing “dress up” with Foamcore Dana. You know…Dana’s pants and shirt? That way it not only looked like Dana, but smelled like her too. Weird right? Wait a sec…that didn’t actually happen right? I seem to have a whole bunch of season 3 memory lapses. Oh well. :) Loved it.
This update brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely loved it! It’s all in the small gestures that emphasis the strong bong between these women (and ofcourse especially Dana and Alice). I was glad to see that Alice replaced Bette. And Alice comforting Dana at any time…they’re just meant to be. *sigh* And I also loved the fact that they went looking for Dana after Carmen’s remark. The original storyline will only fade more to the background from now on. And don’t be scared, you will do just fine on your own. You already did a superb job with this one!
I am totally loving this story!!!
So sweet!! i hope you have a happy ending tho..my hopes are so high lol:)
This is a beautiful story, no matter how you end it. Thank you.
Beautiful Simpy Beautiful….(And I hope all is well with you)
im really liking this story. like how it goes from what was actually happening int he series to your own interpretation of it.
Awesome story. I was so sad by the way things ended in S3 and you gave me hope…Hope for the Danish love to survive even in the worst moments…Please change the IC´s end.Give us Danish fans this happines.
I love love love, this story. It’s so interesting how you take the characters along season 3 but in a different way with alice and dana. I LOVE IT! I’ve had to catch up on the last couple chapters and i just want to read more and more. You’re doing a great job and this story has become one of my favorites. Can’t wait to see what happens next. gotta love the love…:)