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You (Part the Eighth)
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She was cut off by Shane and Carmen grabbing her, one on each side, and carefully lowering her onto the floaty thing, laughing the entire time. “Gee, thanks, bitches,” Alice muttered, flinging some water at them as they turned their backs to her and started talking to Dana again.
“So, darling, tell me about your date this morning. Was your vampirologist as knowledgeable as you’d hoped?” Helena asked, laughing at Alice’s sour expression.
“You guys will never let me live this down, will you?”
“Of course not. It’s quite fascinating, really, and details would be appreciated.” Helena replied, ducking as a wave suddenly came her way at full speed.
“Yeah, Al. Was the lecture specifically about vampire mating habits, or did she actually go off topic to discuss vampires in general?” Shane joined in, turning to meet Helena’s eyes and laughing as Alice splashed her.
“Maybe it’s a sex course…Multiple Vampire-Induced Orgasms 101, or something.” Everyone turned to stare at Dana in surprise before starting to laugh, looking back and forth from Alice’s shocked expression to Dana’s satisfied one.
“Okay, I have no idea how you know about any of that, but I’ll say this and only this: if it had been a sex course, there’s no way it’d be a 101. It’d be, like, graduate level or something. And now I’m done discussing Uta.”
“She doesn’t read minds, Alice, so don’t worry about that. I called Dana earlier this afternoon to see how the treatment had gone, and she mentioned your date, so we got to talking. Eventually I called Shane and the three of us discussed your recent tryst with her. I’m sorry if you meant to keep it secret, darling…it just amuses us.”
“Great, so now I’m the laughingstock,” Alice muttered. She didn’t really care that much, since she’d pretty much considered the Uta thing to be a joke anyway.
“No you’re not, Al! I’m sorry; we weren’t trying to laugh at you. Helena and Shane just wanted to cheer me up, that’s all.” Dana said, genuinely sorry. She felt a lot better when Alice just smiled at her, though.
“Nah, it’s cool, we just kind of broke up this morning. Well, I guess we weren’t really dating anyway, so no big deal. I just don’t really want to discuss it, is all.” She was glad when everyone just nodded, turning their attention away from her.
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Great job, the connection is real! Gives me hope for happy endings.
WOW muted im so very proud of you at this moment! I know that had to be tough to write,but you did it and it was the best update! Im sorry i havent been around ,wishing i was there for you to write this chapter.HUGS and just remember its almost 6 months!! Love ya!!! PPS
Wow Temp this was really really good and im not just saying that i truly mean it.I know what its like to write your own experiences in your story its kinda like an outlet and I know it mustve really been hard for you to write this, especially since youve lived through it. I love the way you ended this chapter. We all have that friend like shane that seems to always be right when you dont want them to be LOL
Wow! This is beautifully written. I loved it. Alice verbiage always make me smile. More Please.
Phenomenal update. It broke my heart, and gave me hope all at the same time. You did a wonderful job, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can only imagine how difficult this was to write, with having your own experiences with cancer. For that I applaude you. Thank you very much for sharing. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. Sorry, but I don’t have any good ideas about the Foamcore Dana. Although, I always did have this picture of Alice playing “dress up” with Foamcore Dana. You know…Dana’s pants and shirt? That way it not only looked like Dana, but smelled like her too. Weird right? Wait a sec…that didn’t actually happen right? I seem to have a whole bunch of season 3 memory lapses. Oh well. :) Loved it.
This update brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely loved it! It’s all in the small gestures that emphasis the strong bong between these women (and ofcourse especially Dana and Alice). I was glad to see that Alice replaced Bette. And Alice comforting Dana at any time…they’re just meant to be. *sigh* And I also loved the fact that they went looking for Dana after Carmen’s remark. The original storyline will only fade more to the background from now on. And don’t be scared, you will do just fine on your own. You already did a superb job with this one!
I am totally loving this story!!!
So sweet!! i hope you have a happy ending tho..my hopes are so high lol:)
This is a beautiful story, no matter how you end it. Thank you.
Beautiful Simpy Beautiful….(And I hope all is well with you)
im really liking this story. like how it goes from what was actually happening int he series to your own interpretation of it.
Awesome story. I was so sad by the way things ended in S3 and you gave me hope…Hope for the Danish love to survive even in the worst moments…Please change the IC´s end.Give us Danish fans this happines.
I love love love, this story. It’s so interesting how you take the characters along season 3 but in a different way with alice and dana. I LOVE IT! I’ve had to catch up on the last couple chapters and i just want to read more and more. You’re doing a great job and this story has become one of my favorites. Can’t wait to see what happens next. gotta love the love…:)