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You (Part the Eighth)
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The same thing might have been on Dana’s mind as she sat on the bed and vented to Bette, telling her she couldn’t relax, couldn’t sleep, couldn’t stop herself from doing any of the crazy shit she’d taken to doing lately. “I love Lara, and I can’t stand her,” she said sadly, because it was honestly breaking her heart. “And I’m terrified to be alone.”
Bette just gave her a little smile, secretly surprised that Dana was being this open. She moved to shut the window, catching Alice’s gaze as she did so and smiling on seeing Alice move toward the door. She shut the blinds and helped Dana get set up in a relaxation exercise, where she was finally able to relax a little as she told Bette about the most beautiful place she could imagine. It was green and bright and alive and peaceful, and all Dana wanted at that moment was to stay there.
Alice had been standing in the doorway since Dana had started, and as Bette looked over at her she could see the tears streaming down Alice’s face. She knew there was nothing more she could really do for Dana. While she did feel a deep bond with her, it was nothing compared to the way Dana and Alice interacted, and in her opinion it was incredibly obvious why Dana couldn’t stand Lara. She wasn’t Alice, and that was that. Of course, Dana didn’t realize that, and Bette was pretty sure that Alice didn’t either. The two of them were so fucking oblivious sometimes, and she figured she may as well try to push them in the right direction. After the conversation she’d had with Lara while the cake was baking, she didn’t see any better time to do it.
This was why she motioned for Alice to move from the doorframe she was leaning against and come sit next to Dana, who was still going on about her happy place. It was adorable, but sad at the same time, and Bette suddenly felt like she was intruding on a private moment or something. So she vacated her chair and practically pushed Alice into it, smiling at her before she walked out of the room. She was almost through the door before she heard Dana say, “I just wanna stay here. Will you stay with me?”
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Great job, the connection is real! Gives me hope for happy endings.
WOW muted im so very proud of you at this moment! I know that had to be tough to write,but you did it and it was the best update! Im sorry i havent been around ,wishing i was there for you to write this chapter.HUGS and just remember its almost 6 months!! Love ya!!! PPS
Wow Temp this was really really good and im not just saying that i truly mean it.I know what its like to write your own experiences in your story its kinda like an outlet and I know it mustve really been hard for you to write this, especially since youve lived through it. I love the way you ended this chapter. We all have that friend like shane that seems to always be right when you dont want them to be LOL
Wow! This is beautifully written. I loved it. Alice verbiage always make me smile. More Please.
Phenomenal update. It broke my heart, and gave me hope all at the same time. You did a wonderful job, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can only imagine how difficult this was to write, with having your own experiences with cancer. For that I applaude you. Thank you very much for sharing. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. Sorry, but I don’t have any good ideas about the Foamcore Dana. Although, I always did have this picture of Alice playing “dress up” with Foamcore Dana. You know…Dana’s pants and shirt? That way it not only looked like Dana, but smelled like her too. Weird right? Wait a sec…that didn’t actually happen right? I seem to have a whole bunch of season 3 memory lapses. Oh well. :) Loved it.
This update brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely loved it! It’s all in the small gestures that emphasis the strong bong between these women (and ofcourse especially Dana and Alice). I was glad to see that Alice replaced Bette. And Alice comforting Dana at any time…they’re just meant to be. *sigh* And I also loved the fact that they went looking for Dana after Carmen’s remark. The original storyline will only fade more to the background from now on. And don’t be scared, you will do just fine on your own. You already did a superb job with this one!
I am totally loving this story!!!
So sweet!! i hope you have a happy ending tho..my hopes are so high lol:)
This is a beautiful story, no matter how you end it. Thank you.
Beautiful Simpy Beautiful….(And I hope all is well with you)
im really liking this story. like how it goes from what was actually happening int he series to your own interpretation of it.
Awesome story. I was so sad by the way things ended in S3 and you gave me hope…Hope for the Danish love to survive even in the worst moments…Please change the IC´s end.Give us Danish fans this happines.
I love love love, this story. It’s so interesting how you take the characters along season 3 but in a different way with alice and dana. I LOVE IT! I’ve had to catch up on the last couple chapters and i just want to read more and more. You’re doing a great job and this story has become one of my favorites. Can’t wait to see what happens next. gotta love the love…:)