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You (Part the Nineteenth)
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"Al, wake up." It was all she heard, although she slowly came to realize that her face was being slapped. "Don’t make me punch you. Get up. I can’t handle more than one of you being unconscious at once." Alice groaned at the sharp pain in her head and finally locked eyes with Shane, who was grinning at her like she’d never been happier.
"What the fuck?" she mumbled, trying to shake the fog out of her brain. That just made her headache worse, though.
"Calm down, you’re okay. You just gave yourself a concussion when you hit the back of your head on the floor. It’s a mild one, though." Shane saw Alice’s eyes cloud with confusion for a minute before it all came rushing back to her, and she sat up as fast as should could with Dana’s name on her lips and panic on her face.
Shane’s hands were on her shoulders, pushing her back down onto the bed as a blinding pain hit her just behind the eyes. "Alice, it’s okay. Take it easy or you’ll make it worse than what it is. Dana’s good, they got her heart rate stabilized and she’s in recovery now. They’re giving her a whole bunch of shit through the IV and they’re monitoring the fuck out of everything, okay? She’s gotta rest if she’s going to come out of this, so just calm down."
"I need to tell her I’m here. She gets scared," Alice mumbled from somewhere between sleep and being awake. She vaguely realized that she was back in Dana’s room, and that was comforting, although it would have been more so if Dana was there too.
"What you need to do is calm down. You have a concussion, Al. It’s not a bad one but it’s still a concussion, so you’re not going anywhere for awhile. Relax; I’ll make sure she knows you’re still here, all right?" As Alice started to drift off from both the head injury and the exhaustion, Shane kissed her forehead. "It’s okay. Everything’s gonna be okay."
Anna came in a few minutes after Alice had gone back to sleep. "She’ll be fine, dear. It’s a really mild one, but with the events of the past few days she’s gonna be feeling it a little more than most people would. We’ll keep her in bed until she gets some real sleep, and we can probably have Dana wheeled back in here by the morning. I think that one will be okay after she gets a lot of rest and nutrients back in her system. Her heart’s doing pretty good now, the rate’s down to almost normal and it’s been that way for a couple hours. Some of the stuff she’s getting now through the IV should keep it form getting too overworked again. She’s out of it too, but if you’d like to step in for a minute and say hi to her you can."
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hi muted – i havent commented on this story until now but i wanted to say THANKYOU so much for writing it…all the gaps have been filled in Ilenes disastrous version and my favourite character has survived! I love this story so much, I search daily for the updates with baited breath! I hope it will continue through Season 4 and beyond! Seeing clips of the new season without Dana is heartwrenching and makes me damn angry she’s not there – but hey, she may be in your fabulous version eh??I await the next instalment, long live Danish and long live yourself! x
How did I not know that I fell behind on this story?! I am slacking, but it’s nice to come around and find this lovely chapter waiting. You know how much I adore Dana and Alice and I am thrilled to read such a wonderfully inspiring and hopeful story. I want to see them dance again, can you do that MT?! xoxox
You are just killing me with this story & I can’t get enough. It is so damn good & so well written … you completely have me on the edge of my seat.
Beautiful. Thank you. PPS
Awesome…Just Awesome…I love Helena…Shane is great! This is so damn good…Keep Up The Great Work!!!
Okay, so last night I was dealing with a major bout of insomnia and turned on the computer and saw your post at 3:45 in the morning and was so excited that I had something to do while I couldn’t sleep. And I left a comment that probably made no sense, but I thoroughly enjoyed it nonetheless. However, I must have been more comatose than I thought b/c apparently I didn’t do it properly and it isn’t here now…so anyway, let me paraphrase: This chapter is so awesome, just like the rest of the story. I’m loving your story so much that I’ve forgotten about the awfulness that was season 3 and your story has completely become my reality. I’m fully content believing that this is what really happened with Alice and Dana. That may have been the most delusional thing I’ve ever said, but I’m really okay with that. Seriously though, you rock and this story is absolutely beautiful!
I’m totalyl with swismiss! I’m happy t black out season 3 and go with this, so no pressure or anything but you’re practically writing season 4 for all of us :D This was soooo good I almost cried, I’ve never cried at a fanfic before but if you keep going this way with all the emotion I may just do that. So now you gotta sit and write more cause I need my fix too!! xxx
I read this what seems like a while ago, but like swismiss, I was completely out of it, so I’m back again now. :-) You must get tired of us saying great chapter, but it was. lol I love the friendship between Helena and Alice. They are fiercely loyal to each other, and Helena is just on the outside enough not to have divided loyalties when it comes to the rest of the group. If Dana didn’t survive, I wouldn’t mind seeing Alice with Helena – but it might be better for Alice not to go the best friend route again.