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You (Part the Nineteenth)
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"But what if I stay this way once this is over?"
"Then you’ll work through it. I’ll help you, and Dana will too. You’re both far too important to each others’ lives to simply give up." She kissed Alice’s forehead. "It’s going to be all right, you know. Everything will work itself out."
"I heard you and Dana talking the other day," Alice confessed, her face buried in Helena’s shoulder.
"Well, I guess that leaves any surprise out of it. I’m sorry you heard that, but I stand by what I said. It doesn’t mean anything, dear."
"Yeah it does. It means something to me. I’m sorry."
"There’s not one goddamn thing for you to be sorry for. It’s life, that’s all. I rather enjoy being your friend, anyway."
"Yay me," Alice mumbled. "Oh shit, some friend I am. I’ve been babbling about Dana and I completely forgot to ask how your thing went today. I’m so sorry. You didn’t actually have to give any money to that bitch, did you? Because I’ll totally testify if she tries to take you to court. Shane and I saw you two at the studio, there’s no way in fuck you were doing anything she didn’t want. Fucking money whore."
"Thank you, darling, but it’s already done. I gave her what she wanted, what she was after all along. My mother showed up, you know." She laughed ruefully. "As much stress as that woman adds to my life, she’s incredibly smart. She figured it all out, but it didn’t matter in the end. Dylan wanted money and money’s what she got."
"Why the fuck would you give her money if you knew she was scamming you?" Alice asked, and Helena had to look away. "Fuck. You really love her, don’t you?" Helena could only nod, she was crying too hard to say anything. Alice hugged her tighter. "Aw, sweetie, I’m so sorry. You don’t deserve that kind of bullshit."
"It’s nothing I shouldn’t be used to by now. Truth be told, I should have seen it coming from the start, but I let myself believe it could work. I guess I was just deluding myself that anyone could love me just for me. Everyone always wants more than that."
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hi muted – i havent commented on this story until now but i wanted to say THANKYOU so much for writing it…all the gaps have been filled in Ilenes disastrous version and my favourite character has survived! I love this story so much, I search daily for the updates with baited breath! I hope it will continue through Season 4 and beyond! Seeing clips of the new season without Dana is heartwrenching and makes me damn angry she’s not there – but hey, she may be in your fabulous version eh??I await the next instalment, long live Danish and long live yourself! x
How did I not know that I fell behind on this story?! I am slacking, but it’s nice to come around and find this lovely chapter waiting. You know how much I adore Dana and Alice and I am thrilled to read such a wonderfully inspiring and hopeful story. I want to see them dance again, can you do that MT?! xoxox
You are just killing me with this story & I can’t get enough. It is so damn good & so well written … you completely have me on the edge of my seat.
Beautiful. Thank you. PPS
Awesome…Just Awesome…I love Helena…Shane is great! This is so damn good…Keep Up The Great Work!!!
Okay, so last night I was dealing with a major bout of insomnia and turned on the computer and saw your post at 3:45 in the morning and was so excited that I had something to do while I couldn’t sleep. And I left a comment that probably made no sense, but I thoroughly enjoyed it nonetheless. However, I must have been more comatose than I thought b/c apparently I didn’t do it properly and it isn’t here now…so anyway, let me paraphrase: This chapter is so awesome, just like the rest of the story. I’m loving your story so much that I’ve forgotten about the awfulness that was season 3 and your story has completely become my reality. I’m fully content believing that this is what really happened with Alice and Dana. That may have been the most delusional thing I’ve ever said, but I’m really okay with that. Seriously though, you rock and this story is absolutely beautiful!
I’m totalyl with swismiss! I’m happy t black out season 3 and go with this, so no pressure or anything but you’re practically writing season 4 for all of us :D This was soooo good I almost cried, I’ve never cried at a fanfic before but if you keep going this way with all the emotion I may just do that. So now you gotta sit and write more cause I need my fix too!! xxx
I read this what seems like a while ago, but like swismiss, I was completely out of it, so I’m back again now. :-) You must get tired of us saying great chapter, but it was. lol I love the friendship between Helena and Alice. They are fiercely loyal to each other, and Helena is just on the outside enough not to have divided loyalties when it comes to the rest of the group. If Dana didn’t survive, I wouldn’t mind seeing Alice with Helena – but it might be better for Alice not to go the best friend route again.