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You (Part the Nineteenth)
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"Fuck those people, babe. I know I’m biased, but you’re pretty fucking wonderful and I think it’s absolute shit that people have ulterior motives like that. Not everybody does, you know. It seems like it sometimes, especially in this city, but it’s not true. The good ones are just hard to find."
"Thank you," Helena whispered, finally composing herself enough to pull away from Alice’s embrace as Anna walked back in with a little plastic tray and some basic nurse equipment.
"Sorry ladies, but I’m going to have to insist that Alice get some rest. Helena, you can come back first thing in the morning. I’m working a double shift so I should still be here when you come in, all right?" She walked around the bed and stuck a thermometer in Alice’s mouth before Alice could get a word out, so she just waved at Helena instead. Helena just laughed, visibly cheerier as she left the hospital and offering thanks to whatever gods there might be that she’d finally managed to find some true friends.
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"Okay, I do want you to get some rest, but if you feel up to taking a walk I can take you down to recovery so you can say goodnight to Dana," Anna told her a few minutes after Helena left.
"That’d be great, thanks," Alice replied, getting out of bed slowly and following along behind Anna, who talked to her all the way there.
"I feel awful for suggesting you take a break, honey. If I’d have known she was in that shape I never would have said a word. I don’t want you feeling bad about it, it was all my fault and I’m very sorry."
"It’s not your fault. It’s not anyone’s fault, and you made that doctor keep shocking her until she was back. I’d say you more than made up for anything you feel bad about. Really, it’s okay and you shouldn’t worry about it," Alice assured her. Anna just stopped at the door to the semi-darkened recovery room and gave her a grateful smile.
"You’re not technically supposed to be out of the room yet, so don’t go making a lot of commotion in there, all right? And don’t stay too long, you need your rest and so does she."
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hi muted – i havent commented on this story until now but i wanted to say THANKYOU so much for writing it…all the gaps have been filled in Ilenes disastrous version and my favourite character has survived! I love this story so much, I search daily for the updates with baited breath! I hope it will continue through Season 4 and beyond! Seeing clips of the new season without Dana is heartwrenching and makes me damn angry she’s not there – but hey, she may be in your fabulous version eh??I await the next instalment, long live Danish and long live yourself! x
How did I not know that I fell behind on this story?! I am slacking, but it’s nice to come around and find this lovely chapter waiting. You know how much I adore Dana and Alice and I am thrilled to read such a wonderfully inspiring and hopeful story. I want to see them dance again, can you do that MT?! xoxox
You are just killing me with this story & I can’t get enough. It is so damn good & so well written … you completely have me on the edge of my seat.
Beautiful. Thank you. PPS
Awesome…Just Awesome…I love Helena…Shane is great! This is so damn good…Keep Up The Great Work!!!
Okay, so last night I was dealing with a major bout of insomnia and turned on the computer and saw your post at 3:45 in the morning and was so excited that I had something to do while I couldn’t sleep. And I left a comment that probably made no sense, but I thoroughly enjoyed it nonetheless. However, I must have been more comatose than I thought b/c apparently I didn’t do it properly and it isn’t here now…so anyway, let me paraphrase: This chapter is so awesome, just like the rest of the story. I’m loving your story so much that I’ve forgotten about the awfulness that was season 3 and your story has completely become my reality. I’m fully content believing that this is what really happened with Alice and Dana. That may have been the most delusional thing I’ve ever said, but I’m really okay with that. Seriously though, you rock and this story is absolutely beautiful!
I’m totalyl with swismiss! I’m happy t black out season 3 and go with this, so no pressure or anything but you’re practically writing season 4 for all of us :D This was soooo good I almost cried, I’ve never cried at a fanfic before but if you keep going this way with all the emotion I may just do that. So now you gotta sit and write more cause I need my fix too!! xxx
I read this what seems like a while ago, but like swismiss, I was completely out of it, so I’m back again now. :-) You must get tired of us saying great chapter, but it was. lol I love the friendship between Helena and Alice. They are fiercely loyal to each other, and Helena is just on the outside enough not to have divided loyalties when it comes to the rest of the group. If Dana didn’t survive, I wouldn’t mind seeing Alice with Helena – but it might be better for Alice not to go the best friend route again.