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    You (Part the Second)

    Story written on October 10, 2006 by MutedTempest.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62779
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    Getting to the core issues.

    “Well, seems like someone’s got to lately, Al. How many pills have you taken today?” Dana asked, sitting next to Alice on the couch and putting what she hoped was a comforting hand on her back. Relieved when Alice didn’t pull away, she turned her gently so she could meet her eyes, which hurt so much that Dana was surprised she didn’t start crying then and there. Alice’s once vibrant eyes were exhausted and filmed over from the pills, and more vacant than Dana had ever seen them. In that split second, she vowed to whatever god or gods might be listening that she was going to do whatever it took to help Al get through this. “Jesus Christ, Alice,” she whispered as she pulled the now crying woman into her arms.

    “Where the hell did you go, Al?” she asked into hair that she was certain hadn’t been washed in the past two days. Alice struggled to answer, but she honestly couldn’t string the words together in any sort of coherent order. That second handful of pills had taken her over the edge, and as much as she tried to fight it, being in Dana’s arms was the first place she’d felt safe in weeks. She was so fucking exhausted that she couldn’t help falling asleep. Dana felt her relax, and decided that letting her go was probably the worst thing she could do as this point. She shifted a little to make them both a bit more comfortable, and gave in to sleep herself.

    Alice woke up about half an hour later, groggy from the pills and confused as hell. She remembered coming to Dana’s, but how the two of them had wound up asleep in each others’ arms was just beyond her. “Dana,” she whispered, poking her ex in the side. “Dana, move your arm, this kinda hurts.”

    Dana moved her arm, but only to pull Alice closer. She was still asleep, and having a really good dream about her upcoming tournament. The side-poking was getting to be a bit too much, though, and she reluctantly opened her eyes, pulling back in shock when she saw Alice looking at her grumpily. “Al?” she asked from that weird surreal place between sleep and consciousness.

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    1. This is so much more real than what IC told us I hope she is reading as well. You lived up to your talent without a doubt. I love what you are doing with this story and will continue. Maybe even keep Dana alive because that’s what all us Danish readers want. Anyway please keep writing! You made my day a little better.

    2. Great job! I really enjoyed it. This is a much more believable direction that Danish is taking. It’s good to see them talking it out. In my opinion, they need each other. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to read more.

    4. Ok, totally love this story. If only IC could have written something so great… and Danishy believable. This is so much easier to grasp than the shit IC put our girls through. Please update again soon, because I am really enjoying this story, even though this was only the second chapter! :-)

    5. Even thought it’s breaking my heart that they did break up and Dana did go back with Lara — an Alice turned to the pills, so far you’re doing it in a way that at least has a direct relationship to the characters as we know and love them. Although I gotta say the above things were also three of the top four reasons (and that’s jus the Danish!) S3 is just to painful to think about, so I hope you’re gonna fix it, otherwise I just might need Alice’s meds all over again. Really looking forward to your next update.

    6. Just got caught up with this fic, excellent job, Muted, it’s like the lost scenes we’ve needed. Yay! Danish friendship is not dead, and having this on the real show would have answered so many “WTF?”-type questions of how things played out on-screen. Is Dana going to let Lara know about her reconciliation of sorts with Alice? I like that you don’t have D and A just jumping to getting back together, but rather, talking about misunderstandings and…moving on (in whatever way/s you’re taking them…?). Can’t wait to keep reading the next updates, please post soon!

    7. I like that you are allowing them to slowly heal. Dana’s illness will probably crop up soon, but I hope you give Alice some time to get stronger. In an out of character move for myself, I hope they don’t get together any time soon. I really like your story.

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