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    You (Part the Second)

    Story written on October 10, 2006 by MutedTempest.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62779
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    Getting to the core issues.

    “Yeah, that’s me. Were you expecting Lara?” Alice bit back, surprising herself with the venom in her voice as she uttered the chef’s name. “Sorry,” she whispered, almost crying again as she pulled away from Dana, who was pretty much awake now and remembered what the hell what was going on.

    “It’s okay. I guess I deserved that, but next time I can’t guarantee I won’t get pissed. Lara’s not the problem here, and I think we both know that.” She stopped for a second and realized that Alice had started to cry again, silently this time. “Hey, it’s gonna be okay, Al. Don’t cry…” Dana murmured as she pulled Alice into another hug. One that lasted through Alice’s silent sobs and shaking, until finally she pulled away, apologizing again.

    “Fuck. What the fuck am I doing, Dana? I don’t even remember how we wound up on the couch. I didn’t…” the thought that she might have done something drastic sprang to her mind. “Shit. I didn’t…um…try anything, did I?”

    “Well, even if you had, you obviously didn’t get very far. Use your powers of deduction, Al. We’re both still fully clothed.” She wasn’t trying to make fun of Alice, exactly, as much as she was trying to diffuse a really awkward situation. They’d never talk about anything significant if Alice thought they’d been making out or worse before she fell asleep. Besides, as much as she tried to deny it, Alice was almost impossibly cute when she was trying to figure shit out.

    “You’re hilarious,” Alice retorted, secretly grateful that Dana was comfortable enough to joke around with her. This whole thing was more than a little uncomfortable, and the effort Dana was putting in to make her feel at ease wasn’t going unnoticed. “So what the fuck happened?”

    “Well, I watched you swallow what had to be at least ten pills before you got out of your car, then walked up to the door like you were the living dead. You started crying, and I hugged you…I guess you fell asleep somewhere in that time. I didn’t have the heart to move you, and I guess I fell asleep too. So your conscience is clear, Al. Don’t worry about it. You feeling any better now?”

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    1. This is so much more real than what IC told us I hope she is reading as well. You lived up to your talent without a doubt. I love what you are doing with this story and will continue. Maybe even keep Dana alive because that’s what all us Danish readers want. Anyway please keep writing! You made my day a little better.

    2. Great job! I really enjoyed it. This is a much more believable direction that Danish is taking. It’s good to see them talking it out. In my opinion, they need each other. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to read more.

    4. Ok, totally love this story. If only IC could have written something so great… and Danishy believable. This is so much easier to grasp than the shit IC put our girls through. Please update again soon, because I am really enjoying this story, even though this was only the second chapter! :-)

    5. Even thought it’s breaking my heart that they did break up and Dana did go back with Lara — an Alice turned to the pills, so far you’re doing it in a way that at least has a direct relationship to the characters as we know and love them. Although I gotta say the above things were also three of the top four reasons (and that’s jus the Danish!) S3 is just to painful to think about, so I hope you’re gonna fix it, otherwise I just might need Alice’s meds all over again. Really looking forward to your next update.

    6. Just got caught up with this fic, excellent job, Muted, it’s like the lost scenes we’ve needed. Yay! Danish friendship is not dead, and having this on the real show would have answered so many “WTF?”-type questions of how things played out on-screen. Is Dana going to let Lara know about her reconciliation of sorts with Alice? I like that you don’t have D and A just jumping to getting back together, but rather, talking about misunderstandings and…moving on (in whatever way/s you’re taking them…?). Can’t wait to keep reading the next updates, please post soon!

    7. I like that you are allowing them to slowly heal. Dana’s illness will probably crop up soon, but I hope you give Alice some time to get stronger. In an out of character move for myself, I hope they don’t get together any time soon. I really like your story.

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