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    You (Part the Second)

    Story written on October 10, 2006 by MutedTempest.
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    Getting to the core issues.

    “No, I don’t…I mean…I remember you saying that, but…um…it was the night you left me when you said it. Wasn’t it?” It made Alice so fucking angry that she didn’t have any control over her memory anymore. At first she’d thought Dana was fucking with her, trying to throw the blame back on her and make her look like an idiot. But the more she thought about it, the more she had the nagging suspicion that Dana was right. She even had a vague memory of calling Dana a few months ago to ask for a CD or something she’d left over there. It’d been a weird conversation, and Alice’s memory of it was still fuzzy, but she did remember asking Dana how her training was going…which of course led to asking how other things were going…which led to Dana admitting that she was seeing Lara again.

    “Oh fuck,” she groaned as it came back to her. “Goddammit, Dana, I’m so fucking sorry. Shit. Oh my god, I said that over the air. I’m such a psychotic bitch.” And now she was crying for real. Her life was such a mess, and she totally expected Dana to throw her out.

    Dana didn’t. To Alice’s complete and utter surprise, she was pulled into another hug. “You’re not a psychotic bitch, Al. Well, maybe a little, but that’s just because you’re so fucked up on those pills all the time. I know you didn’t do that on purpose…at first I thought you did, but when you chased me down the highway yesterday it all kinda fell into place for me. All this lunatic shit is because of the drugs, Alice. And you wanna know something? As much as it sucks and as much as I feel like an asshole for saying this, a lot of it’s my fault. I was so pissed off when you said that on air that I just stopped talking to you. I didn’t even realize things were as bad as they were. I thought you were trying to get back at me for hurting you, so I fought back. Because believe me, I got so many phone calls about what you said that I was worried the story was gonna leak into the press and the commentators would have a field day with it.”

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    1. This is so much more real than what IC told us I hope she is reading as well. You lived up to your talent without a doubt. I love what you are doing with this story and will continue. Maybe even keep Dana alive because that’s what all us Danish readers want. Anyway please keep writing! You made my day a little better.

    2. Great job! I really enjoyed it. This is a much more believable direction that Danish is taking. It’s good to see them talking it out. In my opinion, they need each other. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to read more.

    4. Ok, totally love this story. If only IC could have written something so great… and Danishy believable. This is so much easier to grasp than the shit IC put our girls through. Please update again soon, because I am really enjoying this story, even though this was only the second chapter! :-)

    5. Even thought it’s breaking my heart that they did break up and Dana did go back with Lara — an Alice turned to the pills, so far you’re doing it in a way that at least has a direct relationship to the characters as we know and love them. Although I gotta say the above things were also three of the top four reasons (and that’s jus the Danish!) S3 is just to painful to think about, so I hope you’re gonna fix it, otherwise I just might need Alice’s meds all over again. Really looking forward to your next update.

    6. Just got caught up with this fic, excellent job, Muted, it’s like the lost scenes we’ve needed. Yay! Danish friendship is not dead, and having this on the real show would have answered so many “WTF?”-type questions of how things played out on-screen. Is Dana going to let Lara know about her reconciliation of sorts with Alice? I like that you don’t have D and A just jumping to getting back together, but rather, talking about misunderstandings and…moving on (in whatever way/s you’re taking them…?). Can’t wait to keep reading the next updates, please post soon!

    7. I like that you are allowing them to slowly heal. Dana’s illness will probably crop up soon, but I hope you give Alice some time to get stronger. In an out of character move for myself, I hope they don’t get together any time soon. I really like your story.

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