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    You (Part the Sixty-Second) REVISED

    Story written on March 4, 2008 by MutedTempest.
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    Test results, a little AlShaDane, etc.

    “Somebody burned down my shop,” she said quietly when she pulled back.

    “What? Who?”

    “I don’t know for sure. It doesn’t really matter. Even if I did know, I wouldn’t do anything,” Shane said with a shrug.

    “Why the hell not? You love that shop, Shane. You were starting a merchandise line…I just…aren’t you upset?” Dana asked.

    “Yeah. But I’m not surprised. I’m just really sad that I could ever hurt somebody enough to motivate them to even wanna do it. But it’s really okay. It’s already done.”

    “Please tell me you at least had insurance on it,” Dana said quietly. “You did, right?”

    “Yeah. It wasn’t full coverage, but a little. Enough to cover part of the loss anyway.”

    “You could always rebuild if you wanted to. I mean, I could help you! It wouldn’t be, like, a handout or anything. But if you wanted…” Dana trailed off, looking at the ground. “Not that you have to or anything. It was just an offer.”

    “Thanks. It’s not that I don’t appreciate it, Dana. I just think maybe I should try something else now, you know? I don’t really see the point in trying to rebuild the past,” Shane said with a shrug.

    “But you loved it there!” Dana protested, but after glancing at Shane she sighed. “Okay, I’ll drop it. But if you ever want to talk about it, just let me know, all right? The offer still stands no matter how much time goes by.”

    “Thanks, Dane. I mean it, that really means a lot to me. But I’ll be fine, I always am.”

    “I know you are,” Dana agreed softly. “It worries me a little sometimes.”

    “Don’t worry about me. Really. I’m doing hair for Jenny’s movie financer’s daughters or some shit tomorrow, and it’s a good check. I’ll be all right. Today’s about you.”

    Dana just nodded. They sat there in silence for a few minutes, and then went back inside. Alice had finished her phone conversation a few minutes earlier, and was talking to Kit about her upcoming podcast, which Max was going to be taping there. Kit had brought their food over, and when she saw them approaching she stood up and gave Alice a hug. “Don’t you worry. Any time you need to use this place, just let me know.” She stepped away from Alice and hugged Dana. “You come back here the second you know what’s going on, okay?” Seeing Dana’s surprised expression, she laughed. “You really think my baby sister wasn’t going to tell me what’s going on? I’m sorry if you didn’t want me to know, honey.”

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    1. YEY!! Dane is cancer free!!! lol whee~ whee~ I’m sorry, I ate too much sugar. Anyway, I agree with ACH21, I can totally see Alice fallin’ asleep after sex lol funny. I’m so relieved that Dana doesn’t have cancer again. I knew that you wouldn’t be so cruel with us readers but as I read Dana and Alice’s feelings, I couldn’t help but feel a bit worried. Nway, great job! PPS

    2. It really is an emotional rollercoaster for the two of them! I hopethe next sirgery will be the last one for Dana for a while. Loved the part were Alice was going on and on about the tone of voice. I could totally see the two of them ‘bickering’.

    3. First of all, ditto all my previous comments on the chapter. Excellent job! Now… FWIW: I knew it wasn’t bad news (that the cancer hadn’t returned). That didn’t stop me from wanting to know what the surgery was he was referring to. I’m noisy that way. Plus, your writing is excellent and you have me even more invested in these characters than I already was. Thank you for not keeping us in suspense too long. I’m glad Dana made a decision on reconstruction. I think making that choice — no matter which way she decided — is a step towards moving on with the rest of her life. And this cracked me up for some reason: “And to be honest, she usually falls asleep after sex anyway. I’ll have at least a few hours.” — Hee! Go put your woman to sleep, Dane! Thanks, MT!!

    4. Yeah. I could tell it wasn’t bad i was just wondering what it was. The story is amazing. Like i said before it made the ride alot easier on me the other day to have a good read. Thanks alot MT keep up the amazingness

    6. Wanted to take a moment to leave a comment…Love as always!!! Good Stuff here…I loved the line, about A falling asleep after sex…I can totally see it!

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