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    You (Part the Sixty-Second) REVISED

    Story written on March 4, 2008 by MutedTempest.
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    Test results, a little AlShaDane, etc.

    “No, it’s okay. I just didn’t want you to worry,” Dana replied, returning the hug.

    “I’m gonna whether you want me to or not, but it’s okay. Just how I am. But before you go over there I want you to eat this, I went and had them make it special for you. And when you come back you’re having dinner, no excuses,” Kit said as she walked off.

    “She’s trying to make us fat,” Shane muttered as she looked at the sandwiches and sides Kit had brought over. “She really is.”

    “Not like you can’t use it, fatass,” Alice told her affectionately. Shane just flipped her off and started eating.

    About an hour later, they were all sitting just outside the doctor’s office. They’d been mostly silent since leaving the Planet, and Shane had been nervously bouncing her leg since they’d arrived. Dana kept reaching over and touching her arm for a second, and when Shane would look at her, she’d smile. Shane would smile back a little, but it was obvious she wasn’t doing so well.

    Eventually, Dana couldn’t take it anymore and asked Shane to take a walk to the vending machines with her. They were just around the corner, so they could get back quickly if the doctor came out, although they’d arrived close to an hour before Dana’s appointment time. Alice just nodded when Dana said they’d be right back.

    “It’s okay. You know that, right?” Dana asked softly when they’d turned the corner. Shane just stared at her with a hint of tears in her eyes.

    “What if it’s not?” she asked in a small voice. Dana just hugged her. She wanted to make it better, and she knew Shane had a tough time in hospitals, but there wasn’t anything she could really do.

    “It will be,” she whispered, because she couldn’t think of anything else to say. It made Shane pull herself together a little bit though, which she supposed was all that mattered.

    “Shit, I’m sorry. I’m supposed to be here for you and I’m being all mopey. It’s probably not even anything anyway,” Shane said. While it was obvious she meant her last sentence to be a statement, it came out as more of a question.

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    1. YEY!! Dane is cancer free!!! lol whee~ whee~ I’m sorry, I ate too much sugar. Anyway, I agree with ACH21, I can totally see Alice fallin’ asleep after sex lol funny. I’m so relieved that Dana doesn’t have cancer again. I knew that you wouldn’t be so cruel with us readers but as I read Dana and Alice’s feelings, I couldn’t help but feel a bit worried. Nway, great job! PPS

    2. It really is an emotional rollercoaster for the two of them! I hopethe next sirgery will be the last one for Dana for a while. Loved the part were Alice was going on and on about the tone of voice. I could totally see the two of them ‘bickering’.

    3. First of all, ditto all my previous comments on the chapter. Excellent job! Now… FWIW: I knew it wasn’t bad news (that the cancer hadn’t returned). That didn’t stop me from wanting to know what the surgery was he was referring to. I’m noisy that way. Plus, your writing is excellent and you have me even more invested in these characters than I already was. Thank you for not keeping us in suspense too long. I’m glad Dana made a decision on reconstruction. I think making that choice — no matter which way she decided — is a step towards moving on with the rest of her life. And this cracked me up for some reason: “And to be honest, she usually falls asleep after sex anyway. I’ll have at least a few hours.” — Hee! Go put your woman to sleep, Dane! Thanks, MT!!

    4. Yeah. I could tell it wasn’t bad i was just wondering what it was. The story is amazing. Like i said before it made the ride alot easier on me the other day to have a good read. Thanks alot MT keep up the amazingness

    6. Wanted to take a moment to leave a comment…Love as always!!! Good Stuff here…I loved the line, about A falling asleep after sex…I can totally see it!

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