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    You (Part the Sixty-Second) REVISED

    Story written on March 4, 2008 by MutedTempest.
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    Test results, a little AlShaDane, etc.

    “Yeah, it’s probably nothing,” Dana agreed, because there was nothing else to do. She’d been fine until now, but the realization of where she was had started to get to her a little in the past few minutes. Seeing how anxious Shane was made her nervous, and while she didn’t blame her for it, it hit her a little hard.

    Shane saw it though, and pulled her into a bearhug before she could process what was happening. “Fuck, I’m really, really sorry,” she told Dana quietly. “I’m here though, okay? No matter what. I’m here.”

    “I know,” Dana whispered back. Shane held her for a minute, and when she’d managed to compose herself a little they walked back over to where Alice was sitting.

    “You good?” Alice asked, looking at Shane instead of Dana. Shane nodded slightly and sat down, leaving a chair between her and Alice for Dana to sit in. They each took one of her hands and sat waiting, silent in their thoughts.

    It didn’t take long for Dr. Shapiro to come out. Dana stood up immediately to follow him, motioning that Shane and Alice should stay where they were. They both looked like they wanted to protest, but decided against it and sat back down. She gave them both a small smile and followed the doctor into his office.

    After she’d gone in, Shane took Alice’s hand, and they sat there like that for a few minutes until Alice started to cry quietly. She didn’t mean to, but the stress of the entire thing had been bothering her all day and now that Dana was out of sight, she didn’t have to pretend to be strong.

    “It’s okay,” Shane told her, but she was crying too. Alice didn’t respond, just lowered her head onto Shane’s shoulder and finally allowed herself to let go of all the anxiety she’d been feeling since Dana had told her about the lump. Shane put her arm around Alice’s shoulder and held her as she cried, her own tears falling silently as she contemplated the fact that she might have to deal with the possibility of losing her friend again.

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    Dana sat in silence for a few seconds after the doctor had told her the results. “So…what do I do now?” she asked, glancing up at him.

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    1. YEY!! Dane is cancer free!!! lol whee~ whee~ I’m sorry, I ate too much sugar. Anyway, I agree with ACH21, I can totally see Alice fallin’ asleep after sex lol funny. I’m so relieved that Dana doesn’t have cancer again. I knew that you wouldn’t be so cruel with us readers but as I read Dana and Alice’s feelings, I couldn’t help but feel a bit worried. Nway, great job! PPS

    2. It really is an emotional rollercoaster for the two of them! I hopethe next sirgery will be the last one for Dana for a while. Loved the part were Alice was going on and on about the tone of voice. I could totally see the two of them ‘bickering’.

    3. First of all, ditto all my previous comments on the chapter. Excellent job! Now… FWIW: I knew it wasn’t bad news (that the cancer hadn’t returned). That didn’t stop me from wanting to know what the surgery was he was referring to. I’m noisy that way. Plus, your writing is excellent and you have me even more invested in these characters than I already was. Thank you for not keeping us in suspense too long. I’m glad Dana made a decision on reconstruction. I think making that choice — no matter which way she decided — is a step towards moving on with the rest of her life. And this cracked me up for some reason: “And to be honest, she usually falls asleep after sex anyway. I’ll have at least a few hours.” — Hee! Go put your woman to sleep, Dane! Thanks, MT!!

    4. Yeah. I could tell it wasn’t bad i was just wondering what it was. The story is amazing. Like i said before it made the ride alot easier on me the other day to have a good read. Thanks alot MT keep up the amazingness

    6. Wanted to take a moment to leave a comment…Love as always!!! Good Stuff here…I loved the line, about A falling asleep after sex…I can totally see it!

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