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You (Part the Third)
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All in all, Alice thought that it had gone pretty well, and Helena concurred as they drove to Bette and Tina’s the next day. It was Alice’s birthday, and Helena had surprised her with a limited edition printing of one of her favorite books, along with the promise of a dinner wherever Alice chose to go. Which gave her a lot of options, since Helena had told her that if she even thought about money she’d be hit. And after the scuffle over the shrine (and seeing Helena’s arms at yoga) Alice was in no mood to inspire her wrath.
“You were fantastic, darling. Anyone who knows you had to have seen how well you handled last night. I’m immensely proud of you.”
“Well thanks. It wasn’t exactly easy, but it got a little better as the night went on. I really think it’s okay to start hanging out with the whole family again.”
Helena grinned. Alice was looking so much better today, stronger in a way, and it was good to see. And as sad as she was that Alice had been mistaken and that her friends really had forgotten her birthday, she was happy to see that Alice didn’t break down.
It even had a plus side, this forgotten birthday business. Helena was able to talk to Bette without being completely iced out, and she was glad to see both Bette and Tina freak out about their mistake. Alice was touched by the hastily written-in-frosting version of her name they put on the cake, and as she blew out the candles for Angelica, she was feeling pretty good in the knowledge that as forgetful as they were, her friends really did love her.
Dana hadn’t exactly forgotten Alice’s birthday, she’d just forgotten to call her. Which was understandable, really, since she was so preoccupied with the whole lump situation. Lara was refusing to let it rest, and they had a fairly uncomfortable conversation about it in the tub that night. Dana finally agreed to call Tina’s doctor the next day.
Unable to sleep after Lara had drifted off, Dana started to pace again, from the living room to the kitchen and back. It was a pretty short distance, but she was starting to feel the burn after an hour or so. Finally deciding to stop and get a bottle of water, her eyes drifted to the calendar on the fridge.
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)