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You (Part the Third)
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“Okay,” Dana replied, not wanting to get into it right now. She knew Alice was hurting, and that she didn’t mean her comments maliciously. “Look, Al, I gotta go, okay?”
Complete silence on the other end. Dana realized, too late, that she’d just echoed the words she’d said to Alice before she left her, and it broke her heart a little bit to hear Alice fighting to compose herself on the other end. “Alice, I’m sorry. Please don’t hate me,” she said without any real conscious thought, not even noticing that she’d started to cry. This was just too hard, and if Alice hadn’t been in such a bad place Dana would have just walked away so she’d never have to feel like this again, like her heart was being wrenched out of her chest.
Alice’s heart broke again when she heard Dana crying. She knew why, but she didn’t really want to accept it, afraid to get her hopes up for something that would probably never happen. “It’s okay, Dane, please don’t cry. It’s okay. Go do whatever you have to, okay? I’ll see you later tonight.”
“Alice? Um, maybe Helena could come with you. I mean, if she’s not busy or anything…” She was fishing and she knew it, but she wanted to give Alice something to make her feel better.
“Uh, actually, I think she’s going to be talking to her kids tonight or something,” Al said, trying to think of some way to turn down Dana’s offer without being too much of a bitch. She appreciated it, but it was going to be awkward enough with the two of them being there. Their friends were already being forced to choose sides, and Alice could only imagine how shitty it would be with Bette glaring daggers at Helena all night.
Helena squeezed her hand in gratitude after she’d hung up. “Thank you. I have to say that I’m not too keen on the idea of bringing the Planet’s temperature down by at least twenty degrees.” She flashed a smile at Alice to let her know that she didn’t hold anything against her. It was just slow going with Bette, and as much as Helena wanted to be included in the group, she understood perfectly where Bette’s animosity came from.
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)