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You (Part the Third)
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Alice kinda hated that, though. Which was why, upon hearing Bette, Tina, Shane and Carmen planning what she assumed had to be a surprise party for her, she asked if she could bring Helena along. It was a little awkward, but Bette relented, if a little coldly. Alice couldn’t help but be a little hopeful about it, though. When you cut away the little stuff, Bette and Helena were a lot alike. And Alice was starting to hate the rifts in the family.
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Vulva Las Vegas was more fun than any of them had been expecting. Even Bette and Tina seemed to be having a good time. Despite her earlier protests, Helena had decided to make an appearance, although Dana noticed that she was keeping her distance from the group. Still, the fact that she’d shown up at all was doing wonders for Alice’s nerves, and as Dana stole glances at her from across the table, she couldn’t help but notice how good Alice looked. She was smiling genuinely, and as the incredibly flamboyant Billy Blakie went on, Dana realized that Alice had been right. This guy really was the gayest man on earth.
Feeling happy, really happy, for the first time in months, Dana stole another glance at Alice, who happened to look at her at the same second. Their eyes locked for a minute, and Dana could see no traces of pills or drugs or tears or anything else. She was so proud of Alice for the progress she was making that she couldn’t help but smile at her. Alice returned it, looking shyly down at the table afterward. Dana took that as a great sign, and tried to ignore the little flutter in her heart that always seemed to happen when Alice did something adorable. But they were trying to be friends, and Dana shook her head, forcing herself back to the present.
Of course, Alice had to be her usual snarky self, and as they gathered around to watch Bette bet (author’s confession: sorry, I know it’s cheesy, but that sounded so funny in my head that I had to throw it in) she threw some of the dental dams the staff was passing out at Dana and Lara. Lara looked pretty pissed, but Dana didn’t see a reason to get too upset about it. She just said a quiet “Thanks,” and threw the things at the slightly hilarious woman being called a tiger by her date.
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)