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You (Part the Third)
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“Yeah, but at least she can admit it now. And she’s trying, so I think that counts for something, you know?”
Lara didn’t answer for a minute, and when she did, her voice was a little sad. “Yeah, I know. And that’s good. I’ve never really had a best friend before…and definitely not one as close to me as Alice is to you. So maybe I’m looking at this from the wrong perspective or something, but when I think about Alice all I can see is someone who’s unwilling to let you go. I don’t mean anything malicious by this, but she scares me a little. And she didn’t before. When we were together before I always thought she was great, and it’s like she’s gone off the deep end now.”
Dana didn’t respond, mostly because there was nothing she could really say. Much as she hated to admit it, Lara was right. She decided to drop the whole subject for the time being, hoping against hope that Alice’s group therapy session would do her some good so the two of them could attempt to coexist at the Planet’s Vegas Night later on. Because she was so damn tired lately, and when it came right down to it she wasn’t sure she could handle another outburst right now.
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Alice wanted to kill Helena. Or, if not that, she wanted to make her shut up, because she had a really bad headache and an even worse craving for caffeine, and Helena was still going on and on about Alice giving the group a chance instead of shutting down and making smartass comments through the entire session.
They finally pulled up outside the Center, and Alice couldn’t help but wonder why Helena didn’t have a driver. She had three cars that Alice had seen, probably more someplace else, yet she drove herself everywhere. She was about to ask when Helena practically pushed her out of the car. “Alice! You’re going to be late! Stop looking at me as if I’ve grown two heads and get moving. I’ll be back to pick you up in an hour.”
Shaking her head and making a mental note to ask about the driver thing later, Alice complied, stopping at the vending machine to pick up a diet Coke on the way in. Thinking better of it, she made it four and braced herself for crazy-people-talk-about-crazy-things therapy.
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)