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You (Part the Third)
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And while it was pretty crazy, Alice had to admit that it felt good to talk about it, caffeine high or not. Well, at least it wasn’t some form of psychotropic drug, so she supposed she should be feeling good about that. She wasn’t sure she wanted to go back, but the session had given her a little bit of perspective, and she had to concede that it was nice knowing that other people had problems with obsession.
As promised, Helena met her outside, saying good bye to Wilson over the phone as Alice walked over. “I wonder if most little boys get that excited about the ballet,” she mused, noting the dejected expression on Alice’s face. “How was it?”
“It sucked,” Alice admitted. She’d been going to make some sort of comment on the apple not falling too far from the tree, but she just wasn’t in the mood. Which was weird, when you thought about it, since Alice was pretty much always in the mood for sarcasm. She didn’t really have a chance to think about it too much, though, as Helena led her to the back of the car…
A weird three-person hug later, they were back at Alice’s extremely messy place. Alice was in the bathroom, lighting what she considered to be a well-deserved joint when she heard Helena screaming at her from the living room. “What the fuck, Helena?” she asked as she walked over. Through the fog of the last of the pills’ effects and the pot, she realized that she hadn’t gotten around to taking the shrine down yet. Helena and Janice were staring at her with something close to the look Dana had given her yesterday when she’d told Alice that she knew about the Peeping Tom thing. “Oh that. That’s no biggie,” she said lightly, trying to play it off in case Helena decided to put her money to good use and throw her in the loony bin for a month or so. This probably wouldn’t be the worst idea in the world, considering that the shrine and the Chart were now competing for wall space.
Still, she’d put so much into the fucking thing that she couldn’t let it get torn down, even after Helena confirmed her earlier suspicions that it was an obsessive, psychotic, serial-killer type shrine. After a small scuffle in which Alice considered giving Helena’s personal trainer a call, she allowed the shrine to be dismantled, on the condition that she be allowed to keep the foamcore thing. It really had been hard to get.
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)