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You (Part the Third)
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“Get a box,” Helena told Janice, and Alice was mortified for one of the first times in her life, mostly because the box contained the great majority of the sex toy collection she and Dana had accumulated during their relationship. Helena wasted no time in laying down the rules:
“We’re going to put every single toy the two of you ever used in this box, and then I’m driving you over to the Planet, where I know from Kit that Dana usually is this time of the afternoon. You’re going to give the box to her and walk away. Is that clear?” Alice nodded. She knew Dana wasn’t going to be happy about it, and it seemed a little mean, but she figured she’d done a hell of a lot worse in the past few months. Besides, Dana had said she’d help. It wasn’t as if she really had to do anything to begin with. She rationalized this all to Helena on the way to the café.
“Darling, I’m thrilled that you and Dana are talking this through. I think it’s wonderful, but you can’t simply jump into friendship right away. This might be my vengeful side talking, but Dana hurt you very badly, and she’s treated you horribly these past few months. I do think you’re entitled to your own sort of comeback. Closure, if you will.” Helena grinned at her last remark, and even Alice couldn’t hold back a laugh.
“Do my ears deceive me, or did Helena Peabody just make a funny?” she asked as she playfully slugged Helena’s shoulder. They’d just pulled up in front of the Planet, and as Helena had predicted, Dana’s car was a few spaces up. Alice was suddenly a lot less willing to go through with this. It just seemed really counterproductive, and while she knew Helena was trying to help, she didn’t see how embarrassing Dana again was gong to do any good.
As if she was reading her thoughts, Helena took Alice’s hand and murmured, “Darling, this has to be done. You do realize that if you tried to take these to Dana’s house instead, she’d never accept them? This way, you can just drop the box and walk away. I’m quite certain that she’s not going to hate you.”
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)