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    Young Love: Chapter Five

    Story written on August 27, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    “I was just hoping to see if you would follow me, and you did.” Helena smiled, and Bette laughed.

    “All right ladies, lets take our last ten minute break. We’ll get back out on the courts for another forty-five minutes, and we’ll be done for today.” They walked off the court, and Dana grabbed her bottle of water. She took a drink and the coach walked over to her. “Good job today Dana. Keep it up.”

    “Thanks,” she smiled as she wiped her face off with her towel. Alice came around the fence and walked over to Dana.

    “Hey lady.” Dana looked up and smiled.

    “Hey, what are you doing here?”She looked around.

    “I thought I come by and watch you practice a little.” Alice nodded. “You look really good out there.”

    “Thanks,” Dana smiled goofily and nodded.

    “Are you going to Shane’s tonight?”

    “Yeah, oh wait—I have to go to some important dinner with my parents and Howie, but I’ll be over there later.”

    “Okay, all righty.” Alice laughed. “Well uhh—give me a call later, and I’ll see you tonight.” Dana scratched the side of her face and took a step towards Alice.

    “You look really cute today.” Dana smiled coyly.

    “Well—you look really hot right now. I want to kiss you right now.”

    “But you can’t,” Alice nodded.

    “I know, but you’re wearing this little number here. It’s really turning me on.” Dana chuckled.

    “All right ladies—let’s get back to work.” She looked back and sighed.

    “I gotta go, but I’ll see you tonight.”

    “Yeah,” Alice smiled, and Dana grabbed her racket.

    “See ya,” she ran back on the court, and Alice walked off the court.

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    “Thanks for letting me change here.” Carmen smiled as she walked into Shane’s room. She looked around and noticed some band and movie posters on her walls. She ran her hand across the bed covers and took a seat. Shane went into her closet and grabbed an old Rolling Stone shirt and took off her school shirt. Carmen looked over at Shane and watched her slip into her shirt. Shane turned around, and Carmen looked away. Shane smirked and grabbed her school shirt off the floor. She threw it in her hamper and walked over to Carmen.

    “You can change now if you want. I’m going to get some things ready.” Carmen nodded, and Shane began to walk out.

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    1. Aki loving this chapter. Oh how I feel for Dana, and I hope she doesnt get drunk, at least not too much, and that Al will be there for her. Shane and Carmen are nice, I like the fact that Shane is actually taking it slow w/her I think she is really into her, and last I leave Helena and Bette, loved them!!!!!

    3. Sorry I missed commenting on your last post. This story is really coming along great. Bette, Tina & Helena getting into a triangle; and poor Dana, getting drunk? What could happen next? Can’t wait until you next post.

    6. Great update! It can be quite hard in life trying to find one’s self without the added pressure of others. But here’s hoping that Dana can put herself on the path that is right for her. As for Tina letting go seems to be the last thing on her mind. So if I was Bette or Helena I would be careful in what I do. Sometimes your worst enemy is the one who smiles and says nothing.

    8. Hey ACB, Am loving this Young Gals approach. Shame that Tina was such as bia-tch to Bette but that leaves the door open nicely for Bette and Helena to get together. Dana and Alice are just too sweet. Shame that Dana’s parents are only focussed on her being with a boy and not on being happy. I know that Alice will be there to support her. Carmen and Shane are hot so need to steam up my screen sometime soon. I really thought that Tina was gonna bust in and cause chaos. Please continue soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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