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    Young Love: Chapter Five

    Story written on August 27, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    “I was just hoping to see if you would follow me, and you did.” Helena smiled, and Bette laughed.

    “Hey, who’s this?” Carmen pointed at a picture of Shane and a little kid.

    Shane smiled. “It’s me and my little brother Shay.”

    “You two are cute together,” Carmen looked at Shane and smiled.

    “Thanks. He’s a great kid, and I’ll do anything for him y’know. He’s the best.”

    “You really love him.”

    Shane nodded. “Yeah—I would kill anyone if they hurt him.”

    “I know how you feel. I have younger brother and sister, so I always worry about them because I’m so far away now.”

    “If you ever need a ride to see them, give me a call.”

    Carmen smiled. “That’s so sweet of you. Thank you.”

    “No problem,” they both looked at each other and smiled. Shane leaned forward, and Carmen met her halfway. Their lips met for second, and they pulled away. Carmen smiled timidly, and Shane smirked. Shane cupped Carmen’s face and kissed her softly. Carmen moaned softly and raked her fingers through Shane’s messy mane. Shane ran her hands under Carmen’s shirt and began to lift it over her head. Carmen laughed as Shane got her shirt over her head. Shane smiled and pulled Carmen back into a kiss. They stopped when Shane heard the door bell.

    “Shit.” Shane sighed heavily as she pulled away from Carmen.

    “It’s better that we stopped anyway.” Carmen nodded and smiled. “I have to get dressed.”

    “I’ll see you downstairs.” Shane winked at her and walked out of her bedroom. Carmen exhaled and raked her fingers through her hair.  Shane jog down the steps and made her way down to the door. She unlocked the door and smiled. “Hey guys,” Alice, Mark, Mark’s girlfriend Largo, Gomey and his girlfriend Teagan, Helena and Bette. “C’mon in.” They all walked in the house, and she closed the door.

    “So where are the parents?” Alice took off her jacket.

    “They went up to Oregon to go see Carla’s parents. They won’t be back til Sunday.” Everybody walked into the family room and found their spots in the room.

    “So where’s Carmen?” Shane looked at Helena.

    “She’s upstairs changing. She’ll be down in a bit.” She nodded. “Where’s D?”

    “She had some dinner to go to with her parents and Howie. She said she’ll be over later.”

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    1. Aki loving this chapter. Oh how I feel for Dana, and I hope she doesnt get drunk, at least not too much, and that Al will be there for her. Shane and Carmen are nice, I like the fact that Shane is actually taking it slow w/her I think she is really into her, and last I leave Helena and Bette, loved them!!!!!

    3. Sorry I missed commenting on your last post. This story is really coming along great. Bette, Tina & Helena getting into a triangle; and poor Dana, getting drunk? What could happen next? Can’t wait until you next post.

    6. Great update! It can be quite hard in life trying to find one’s self without the added pressure of others. But here’s hoping that Dana can put herself on the path that is right for her. As for Tina letting go seems to be the last thing on her mind. So if I was Bette or Helena I would be careful in what I do. Sometimes your worst enemy is the one who smiles and says nothing.

    8. Hey ACB, Am loving this Young Gals approach. Shame that Tina was such as bia-tch to Bette but that leaves the door open nicely for Bette and Helena to get together. Dana and Alice are just too sweet. Shame that Dana’s parents are only focussed on her being with a boy and not on being happy. I know that Alice will be there to support her. Carmen and Shane are hot so need to steam up my screen sometime soon. I really thought that Tina was gonna bust in and cause chaos. Please continue soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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