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Young Love: Chapter Five
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“Hello everybody.” Carmen walked into the family room.
“Teagan, Largo—this is Carmen. Carmen—this is Teagan, Gomey’s girlfriend and Largo, Mark’s girlfriend.” Carmen smiled, and they said hi. “All right, the drinks are in the fridge and let’s have some fun.” Shane clapped her hands together. They all went to the kitchen and got their drinks. They walked back into the family room and all sat around. Shane turned on the stereo and put on a CD. She walked over to the couch and took a seat next to Carmen.
“I always thought that Orange County was so snobbish and uptight, but so far I like what I see.” Carmen took a swig of her beer.
Alice shook her head. “It’s because you’ve met the only cool people in this county. We’re the most down to earth people you’ll ever meet in here. Everyone else is so anal retentive.” The group smiled and laughed.
“But Alice does have a point. We are the coolest group you could ever meet.” Helena spoke.
“You were a little bit on the spoiled rotten side when we first met you Helena.” Bette took a drink from her bottle.
“How so?”
“You don’t remember.” Shane smirked. “You were such a bitch.” Helena scuffed. “I’m sorry, but it’s the truth.”
“Okay—maybe I was a little bit on the bitchy side, but I’ve changed.” The door bell rang, and Shane looked up.
“Hey Al—can you go get the door?”
“Why me?”
Shane smirked. “Go get the door.” Alice sighed.
“I’m going.” She got up from the floor and walked towards the door. She pulled her pants up and took a drink of her beer. She put on her hand on the knob and turned it. She opened the door and smiled, but her smile faded away. Dana looked up at Alice with tears in her eyes. “Hey Dane—what’s wrong?”
“I hate my life.” Alice wrapped her arm around Dana and brought her into the house. They walked into the family room, and everybody looked up.
“What’s wrong?” Bette frowned. Alice took a seat back on the floor with Dana next to her.
“What happened Dana?” Dana sniffed and wiped her eyes.
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Aki loving this chapter. Oh how I feel for Dana, and I hope she doesnt get drunk, at least not too much, and that Al will be there for her. Shane and Carmen are nice, I like the fact that Shane is actually taking it slow w/her I think she is really into her, and last I leave Helena and Bette, loved them!!!!!
just catching up…Mmmm Tina, Bette & Helena…not happy!!! Dana pissed, yeah why not?
Sorry I missed commenting on your last post. This story is really coming along great. Bette, Tina & Helena getting into a triangle; and poor Dana, getting drunk? What could happen next? Can’t wait until you next post.
great story love it!!! :)
Drunk Dana…love it….flirty Helena and Bette…love it even more…pps
Great update! It can be quite hard in life trying to find one’s self without the added pressure of others. But here’s hoping that Dana can put herself on the path that is right for her. As for Tina letting go seems to be the last thing on her mind. So if I was Bette or Helena I would be careful in what I do. Sometimes your worst enemy is the one who smiles and says nothing.
I agree, Dana drunk is always funny for some reason. I’m really interested to see how you write the progression of Shane and Carmen. PPS.
Hey ACB, Am loving this Young Gals approach. Shame that Tina was such as bia-tch to Bette but that leaves the door open nicely for Bette and Helena to get together. Dana and Alice are just too sweet. Shame that Dana’s parents are only focussed on her being with a boy and not on being happy. I know that Alice will be there to support her. Carmen and Shane are hot so need to steam up my screen sometime soon. I really thought that Tina was gonna bust in and cause chaos. Please continue soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.