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6 Months- chapter 14
Alice parked her car and walked slowly into The Planet. Shane and Dana were already there, waiting with worried expressions on each of their faces. Alice tiredly sat down, pulling the letter out from her purse and laying it on the table. Both women looked at the envelope, questions flashing across their faces, but neither spoke.
“Dana,” Alice started off, “you had asked me if I had heard back from Bette, and I told you that I had not. That turned out not to be the case.”
“What?” Dana asked, “She did call back?”
Alice looked at the envelope on the table and then looked at each of the girls, waiting for them to realize that the letter was from Bette.
“That” she nodded at the envelope “is how I heard back from Bette. But it is actually not back from Bette, as I am sure that she never got my message.”
“I don’t understand” Shane said. “Why would Bette write you a letter when she lives like half a mile from of all of us?”
“That would be because Bette no longer lives half a mile from of all of us” Alice said.
“What, she moved into another place and that is why she hasn’t called, because she has been too busy?”
“Yes and no Dana” Alice responded.
“So Al, are you going to friggin’ say it or what? So ***** what that Bette moved to another part of town. It’s not like we don’t have cars. We can go see her you know!” Shane said angrily.
“No, I don’t know” Alice sadly said.
“What the ***** Al? Why are you so upset over Bette getting a new place? So she is a little further from us than she was. Big ***** deal! I mean, how far can she be to get you this upset. The Valley?” Shane asked.
“New York” Alice whispered.
“What did you just say?” Dana asked.
“New York” Alice softly repeated.
There was complete silence at the table. Both Dana and Shane just stared at Alice, willing themselves to have misunderstood.
“I don’t under-” Dana began.
“Don’t” Alice said. “Just listen.”
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(30 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
God you’ve got us hooked, bring on the next chapter….please. this is great. I love it.
Patiently waiting for the next chapter. So it’s going to get difficult aye can’t wait.
my heart was racing and then you stuck your toe in it. Please I can’t breath, need another chapter.
your comments are appreciated and well received. will see what i can get through tonight, but know that things get difficult from here on…
thank god you post so quickly. i cant wait for the next one.
YOu’re one of the fastest writers to post… good job.. thanks for not leaving me hangin there…
I have to know what tina’s going to do.
This is really a terrific story. I am anxiously waiting the next chapter.
brilliant…
Again, written so beautifully…so concise and intense…and yes, you are fast…hope more comes today…thank you!!! 10!
this stories f*ckin rock….cant wait until tina’s response….keep up the good job!!!
Aw c’mon girl don’t tease my heart like this… I know this is selfish of me but you can’t be serious leaving us at the edge of our seats like this.. PLEASE continue please.. pretty… pretty please don’t make me beg.. great writing as usual by the way *wink*
people need to sleep please Tina’s reaction…..
I can’t believe that you are tormenting us like this. Just give us Tina’s reaction for tonight, then you can continue tomorrow. Thanks
I’m with Fan4B&T and hotpepper…come on **says in a whiny voice**
No!!!! Don’t leave us like this. Please promise me at least you will post tomorrow morning. I have to go to bed now.BTW, I love your series.
As much as I agree with the other comments, I will try to patiently wait for Bette’s letter and Tina’s reaction because I want to read it all together in a full (long) chapter. All of our comments are a testament to your great writing! We are addicted to your fanfic :)
Excellent again. I’m still playing catch-up!