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HEREAFTER. Chapter 35. Epilogue
HEREAFTER. Chapter 34. Epilogue
Flashbacks:
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I love you kiss in the mouth
I love you hands in the *****
I love you tongue on the earlobe
Babe the contractors are right there, seeing us ragged breath
I love you shirt untucked
I love you right hand on the breast
Oh god eyes closing, battle lost Bette for Christ sake just let me close the blinds
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Mom!!! I cant find my shoes
Baby ask your mommy you know Tina handle that sort of stuff
mommy I want breakfast
Oh forget it Jess, mommy also handle that department
very funny Katie, very funny, just remember who handle the Sunday money department Bette said straightening up her suit
Oh Bette you let her get you every time Tina said entering the room, here are your shoes katie, Jessie I leave you pop tarts on the kitchen table Both girls stormed away
Bette looked defeated Hey, come here Tina said pulling Bette to her arms whats with the poppy eyes, huh. You handle the Tina department, without your perfect management none of the other departments could work
Bette smiled Mommy, I lost a kiss and am hungry for a kiss
See perfect management Tina similed back, once again in charge of the lost and found department
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Babe is okay, we will be right outside
Tina am not so sure about this
Bette we have talked about it, is totally safe and is a short recovery, and you will have a brand new almost bionic knee after this
I dont know why am so scare, I just dont want to ask for more then I already have
Babe all of the shoes drooped in the past, now is only payback time, we love you we will be outside and everything will be just fine
Give me a kiss
Tina did
Kiss again the girls for me
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Jess, I have a boyfriend
You what?
I have a boyfriend Katie happily said
you can not have a boyfriend Jessie said outrage at the thought
Am older than you, of course I can Katie said to her it was reasonable
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(58 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
Tee, I think your story was great – excellent ideas, however, I’m sensing that perhaps english isn’t your first language? One thing that really took away from the story was the grammar and punctuation. I’m sorry, I’m such a word freak, but perhaps an editor or spelling program would really help with that. I truly did love your story. Look forward to more.
GREAT!GREAT!GREAT ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beautiful. Thanks
awesome!!! there’s gonna be sequel to this right?
Thank you and a sequel is an excellent idea.
Thank you so much. You and this story is are truly amazing!!!
Sorry,if I seen to be a step a head of you story, That is old age not a writer.Oil paint and writing don’t mix very well. You story I have enjoyed so much each chapter was so well written and left us all full of hope for a better tomorrow for Tina and Bette, Thanks so much for your time energy and effort that you put into this.
Wonderful! You did an amazing job with this story. ; ) Thanks.
Smiling such a big smile for just one more chance at a glance into this family we all love so much. Thanks for not leaving us high and “dry” (pun intended!!!) Love it and will miss it!!
tee! so help me, i am gonna hunt you down. omg, “end of the epilogue!” come on and put us and yourself out of our misery and just start a new series or sequel. you know you want to! this was a great chapter with feel good times. i loved the toat at the boat too. lol. but this doesn’t mean you are off the hook, get to typing! thanks for writing this series though, it was great. :D
It has been a wonderful ride indeed. Great way to end it. Glad to meet you too (smiles). You’ve definitely written an interesting twist and offered a unique perspective. If you ever decide to write again or write a sequel, you’d be sure to see my marks there!
Tee that was great .. Thanks again for a wonderful story.
Great job, Tee! Looking forward to your next story!
Once again you do not disappoint. Thanks for the great story and don’t stay away too long.
I truly thank you for the epilogue.
Your writing is so powerful that you want the readers to be there in the moment. I want my love life to work out like Tina’s and Bette’s in this story. Through all the things they have been through you seemed to find away to get them through it and I thank you for it. I am going to miss your posts everyday when I come home. *Tear Tear. Thanks for posting. P.S. If you need anymore protecting I will always be here. Later Days.
Your writing is so powerful that you want the readers to be there in the moment. I want my love life to work out like Tina’s and Bette’s in this story. Through all the things they have been through you seemed to find away to get them through it and I thank you for it. I am going to miss your posts everyday when I come home. *Tear Tear. Thanks for posting. P.S. If you need anymore protecting I will always be here. Later Days.
Tina and Bette have found the greatest reward that anyone can give or get. Someone told me you can never give it or get enough of it, but I think you did. I am truly touch by your writing you have done an awsome job with it. Right now I am in totally awe state that this is your last chapter. But I just want to say thanks for posting.
That was wonderful You did an excellent job and brought a huge smile to my face. I sincerely hope you’ll start a new one because you are an amazing writer…
I love it. Please write another….u are a great writer!!! Dont put it all to waste
Hey Tee sorry for not commenting lately but I’ve really enjoyed this series and I’m glad you didn’t finish on the last chapter. Looking forward to another series from you :)
And about Lou, I’ve tried so many times to write something but what I’ve come up with has been rubbish and also as you know I’ve been distracted making the videos :)
Estoy sonriendo como una imbecil! Gracias, gracias, gracias!
Thank you for the hours you spent delivering this clever collection of family drama. You are quite talented and I hope you will grace us with your presence again very soon.
REALLY NICE SERIES!
Thank you for the happy ending chapter. Hope to read more of your story soon.