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HEREAFTER. Chapter 35. Epilogue
I Love You Bette
I love you too baby, please think about it
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Girls come on!! We are never going to leave at this rate Bette screamed God this kids take longer than us to get ready
Well I dont complain, that usually give us plenty of time Tina said hugging Bette from behind resting her head on her shoulder blades
You know I couldnt do this if you hadnt convince me of that surgery
I didnt do it for you believe me Tina said playfully clearly letting the innuendo
Wow someone woke up spicy today
Well someone was spicy last night she retorted
were done Katie announce Mommy can I have my pill, I dont want to get dizzy mom she asked a baby girl all over again
Sure baby I have it right here, in the kitchen
You gonna love it Jess Bette said to her beautiful daughter
You gonna teach me all, right? she asked hopeful, that made Bette prouder
You know I will…. Once I got it down myself Bette confessed, for all of the classes she had taken was still not too sure.
Oh mom is just our luck that we all know how to swim
Well here it is Bette said to the three women of her life
WOW, Bette is beautiful Tina could already see them making madly love on the deck under the stars with the breeze drying their naked sweaty bodies
You like it babe Bette asked apprehensive she was waiting for a riffraff over how big and expensive it looked, but Tina just nodded in awe.
We are going to impress guys with this Katie said to Jess
Note to my teenage daughter, am gonna pretend I didnt hear that
Jessie laughed at Katie and run to hoop aboard Is awesome mom, I think is awesome
he, he, he. A moment there Young lady, we need to have a little ceremony here Bette said solemnity evident, no one dare to question that.
Okay baby we listening Tina said warping her arms around her daughters
Bette cleared her throat am not gonna make this long… I just want to say that you, the three of you are the center of my universe, that I count my blessings everyday, that love is not word enough to express my feeling, that this boat is a dream of mine one that only shared with you has a meaning, I want us to have a lot of happy days in this vessel, that you girls now you growing up dont go astray, but to keep coming to your mothers because we love you,
Bette rolled her eyes for effect as if thinking of something that she is forgetting Oh yeah that you girls dont mind and stay in your quarters when I made love to your mother on the deck
MOM!!! both girls screamed, Tina just had to laugh. She was going to scold Bette for that latter.
Okay, okay, what I want for this dream to happen is that we keep being the family that we are, so without further ado, I present you she said unveiling the little robe covering the plaque The Family
was with tears in her eyes that Tina busted the Champaign bottle, making it real, the girls both cut the red ribbon at the entrance and after much efforts that Bette manage to find the way out of the slit on the marine and safely sail The Family into the sunset.
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End of the Epilogue.
November 04, 2004.
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(58 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
Tee, I think your story was great – excellent ideas, however, I’m sensing that perhaps english isn’t your first language? One thing that really took away from the story was the grammar and punctuation. I’m sorry, I’m such a word freak, but perhaps an editor or spelling program would really help with that. I truly did love your story. Look forward to more.
GREAT!GREAT!GREAT ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beautiful. Thanks
awesome!!! there’s gonna be sequel to this right?
Thank you and a sequel is an excellent idea.
Thank you so much. You and this story is are truly amazing!!!
Sorry,if I seen to be a step a head of you story, That is old age not a writer.Oil paint and writing don’t mix very well. You story I have enjoyed so much each chapter was so well written and left us all full of hope for a better tomorrow for Tina and Bette, Thanks so much for your time energy and effort that you put into this.
Wonderful! You did an amazing job with this story. ; ) Thanks.
Smiling such a big smile for just one more chance at a glance into this family we all love so much. Thanks for not leaving us high and “dry” (pun intended!!!) Love it and will miss it!!
tee! so help me, i am gonna hunt you down. omg, “end of the epilogue!” come on and put us and yourself out of our misery and just start a new series or sequel. you know you want to! this was a great chapter with feel good times. i loved the toat at the boat too. lol. but this doesn’t mean you are off the hook, get to typing! thanks for writing this series though, it was great. :D
It has been a wonderful ride indeed. Great way to end it. Glad to meet you too (smiles). You’ve definitely written an interesting twist and offered a unique perspective. If you ever decide to write again or write a sequel, you’d be sure to see my marks there!
Tee that was great .. Thanks again for a wonderful story.
Great job, Tee! Looking forward to your next story!
Once again you do not disappoint. Thanks for the great story and don’t stay away too long.
I truly thank you for the epilogue.
Your writing is so powerful that you want the readers to be there in the moment. I want my love life to work out like Tina’s and Bette’s in this story. Through all the things they have been through you seemed to find away to get them through it and I thank you for it. I am going to miss your posts everyday when I come home. *Tear Tear. Thanks for posting. P.S. If you need anymore protecting I will always be here. Later Days.
Your writing is so powerful that you want the readers to be there in the moment. I want my love life to work out like Tina’s and Bette’s in this story. Through all the things they have been through you seemed to find away to get them through it and I thank you for it. I am going to miss your posts everyday when I come home. *Tear Tear. Thanks for posting. P.S. If you need anymore protecting I will always be here. Later Days.
Tina and Bette have found the greatest reward that anyone can give or get. Someone told me you can never give it or get enough of it, but I think you did. I am truly touch by your writing you have done an awsome job with it. Right now I am in totally awe state that this is your last chapter. But I just want to say thanks for posting.
That was wonderful You did an excellent job and brought a huge smile to my face. I sincerely hope you’ll start a new one because you are an amazing writer…
I love it. Please write another….u are a great writer!!! Dont put it all to waste
Hey Tee sorry for not commenting lately but I’ve really enjoyed this series and I’m glad you didn’t finish on the last chapter. Looking forward to another series from you :)
And about Lou, I’ve tried so many times to write something but what I’ve come up with has been rubbish and also as you know I’ve been distracted making the videos :)
Estoy sonriendo como una imbecil! Gracias, gracias, gracias!
Thank you for the hours you spent delivering this clever collection of family drama. You are quite talented and I hope you will grace us with your presence again very soon.
REALLY NICE SERIES!
Thank you for the happy ending chapter. Hope to read more of your story soon.