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    HEREAFTER. Chapter 35. Epilogue

    am telling to our moms

    No you not, you are covering for me

    Tell me you not thinking Dylan Jessie asked pleading to her sister, Katie just look suspicious

    Katie Kennard am gonna have to kick your senseless

    Oh Jessie but he is so cute

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    Jesus Tina you can not keep working like this, we never see you anymore

    I am not the maid Bette, I will hire someone else to help us

    I cant believe you just said that, what you gonna hire someone to attend your growing girls and to attend my needs

    Wouldnt you like that, someone to attend your needs Tina said sarcastically, she was cranky and right in the edge to fight

    Yeah you should hire me some help, because is not like I miss YOU or is not like I can come out and get it on my own, right. And even if I would is not like you would notice Bette said leaving the room slamming the door after her

    Am sorry Tina said to Bette after giving her enough time to cool down she found her in the front porch

    What are you sorry about exactly?

    I know I havent been much around lately she said inconspicuously, melting Bette with the tone of her voice

    Tina is not like I want to keep you too myself, but you are breaking your back, not seeing your children, we are loosing touch, all that over a job you dont really love, You know we dont need the money, why not you use your time in something that will fulfil you more?

    Is her money Bette

    No Tina is not, I have enough of my own, Melvin leave some more too, You have enough money, that is our money Tina, her money I havent touch it is in a trust fund for the girls

    I dont know, I just remember how I lost my identity when I quit my job back then

    Is only money Tina, we need you more than that, and you dont need to devote yourself to us, thats not what am asking, all I want is to see a happy Tina, not a pressured never present Tina

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    Comments

    1. Tee, I think your story was great – excellent ideas, however, I’m sensing that perhaps english isn’t your first language? One thing that really took away from the story was the grammar and punctuation. I’m sorry, I’m such a word freak, but perhaps an editor or spelling program would really help with that. I truly did love your story. Look forward to more.

    2. Sorry,if I seen to be a step a head of you story, That is old age not a writer.Oil paint and writing don’t mix very well. You story I have enjoyed so much each chapter was so well written and left us all full of hope for a better tomorrow for Tina and Bette, Thanks so much for your time energy and effort that you put into this.

    3. Smiling such a big smile for just one more chance at a glance into this family we all love so much. Thanks for not leaving us high and “dry” (pun intended!!!) Love it and will miss it!!

    4. tee! so help me, i am gonna hunt you down. omg, “end of the epilogue!” come on and put us and yourself out of our misery and just start a new series or sequel. you know you want to! this was a great chapter with feel good times. i loved the toat at the boat too. lol. but this doesn’t mean you are off the hook, get to typing! thanks for writing this series though, it was great. :D

    5. It has been a wonderful ride indeed. Great way to end it. Glad to meet you too (smiles). You’ve definitely written an interesting twist and offered a unique perspective. If you ever decide to write again or write a sequel, you’d be sure to see my marks there!

    6. Your writing is so powerful that you want the readers to be there in the moment. I want my love life to work out like Tina’s and Bette’s in this story. Through all the things they have been through you seemed to find away to get them through it and I thank you for it. I am going to miss your posts everyday when I come home. *Tear Tear. Thanks for posting. P.S. If you need anymore protecting I will always be here. Later Days.

    7. Your writing is so powerful that you want the readers to be there in the moment. I want my love life to work out like Tina’s and Bette’s in this story. Through all the things they have been through you seemed to find away to get them through it and I thank you for it. I am going to miss your posts everyday when I come home. *Tear Tear. Thanks for posting. P.S. If you need anymore protecting I will always be here. Later Days.

    8. Tina and Bette have found the greatest reward that anyone can give or get. Someone told me you can never give it or get enough of it, but I think you did. I am truly touch by your writing you have done an awsome job with it. Right now I am in totally awe state that this is your last chapter. But I just want to say thanks for posting.

    9. Hey Tee sorry for not commenting lately but I’ve really enjoyed this series and I’m glad you didn’t finish on the last chapter. Looking forward to another series from you :)

      And about Lou, I’ve tried so many times to write something but what I’ve come up with has been rubbish and also as you know I’ve been distracted making the videos :)

    10. Thank you for the hours you spent delivering this clever collection of family drama. You are quite talented and I hope you will grace us with your presence again very soon.

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