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The Promise
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Dash laughed from the floor where she played with Achilles.
Dana: You take Visa?
Shane shook her head.
Shane: I take Fairbanks…thats it.
Dana: And if I refuse the hug?
Dana: Then you can pay me the six hundred dollars I charge now.
Dana: WHAT!?!
Shane: Thats how much it cost minimum for a Shane Original…not to mention youre on the A -List.
Dana bit her bottom lip and looked down at the floor.
Dana: How long?
Shane: Hmm..What is the length of a decent hug?
Dash: I would say a good fifteen seconds.
Shane nodded and threw Dash a wink.
Dana: Five.
Shane: Fourteen.
Dana: Ten!
Shane: Twenty!
Dana: *****…Okay, fifteen.
Shane backed away from the chair and let her stand up. Dash sat watching and just shook her head at the ridiculous display before her. Dana had her arms crossed and continued to look down at the ground.
Dash: Oh just ***** hug her Fairbanks!
Shane let out a monstrous laugh from deep in her stomach. It was too cute the way Dash and Dana had bickered back and forth all night. Dash had already taken to calling Dana by her last name like everyone else did.
Shane stepped up to Dana, reached out and pulled her in by her belt loops. She held them against each other and wrapped her arms around Danas waist. Dana stood like a statue and kept her arms crossed.
Shane: Longer you hold out, the longer this will take.
Shane looked her in the eyes and Dana tried her hardest not to look back. Dana relented and reached up to brush Shanes long messy bangs out of her eyes. She lingered on a single lock of Green and looked at it. Dana looked down at Shane whose eyes were now pleading.
Shane: Im sorry Dane…I really am…dont think I meant to hurt you.
Dana: I called you twice a day for over a month.
Shane nodded.
Shane: And I listened to every message…even the ones where you said I was a selfish *****.
Dana: You still are…
Shane smiled and nodded. Dana put her forearms on Shanes shoulder, and Shane took the opportunity to move in for a tight hug.
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos