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The Promise
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Shane: I missed this.
Dana: What?…we never hugged…
Shane: Yeah but you wanted to.
Dana nodded into Shanes neck. They held each other tightly enjoying the brief display of emotions the two would never admit they had, let alone actually show.
Shane: Im sorry Dane…..God, it seems like thats all Ive been saying lately….youre right, all I do is ***** things up.
Dana: So stop.
Shane: Im trying…trust me I am…
Dana pulled out of the hug and turned to walk out. Shane looked at Dash on the floor and back at Dana. She stood with her arms held out as if still in the embrace.
Dana: Ill accept your apology, but Im not ready to forgive or trust you yet…I dont care about the others Shane, Im looking out for me now…youre a runner, and I know any day the other shoe will drop and youll take off again.
Dana picked up her sweatshirt and walked out the door.
Shane: What will it take for you to believe that Im not running anymore?
Dana stopped in the doorway and spoke over her shoulder
Dana: Show me something in you life worth staying for? I used to think it was us….but I was naive.
Dana turned and walked out, leaving Shane and Dash alone in the salon.
Shane: Alice…Im with Alice…Thats right, you heard me…Im with Alice and were ***** like rabbits on crack…were talking the good ***** so there!
Dash looked around and then down at Achilles who shrugged and lowered his head to the floor.
Dash: Uhm, she pulled off like two minutes ago man…
Shane: Shut up…I just wanted to say it…feels kinda good you know?
Dash shook her head and layed down on the floor placing her head on the dogs sleeping body.
Dash: Too much ***** Drama!
Shane rolled her eyes and started cleaning up her workstation.
Shane: Come on lets get you home and to bed…If I know Bette, weve got an early and brutal day tomorrow.
@}~~~~~
Bette pulled up in the driveway and parked behind Tinas car. She practically skipped into the house.
Bette: Baby…Im home.
There was no point in hiding the happiness she had post recording session. She walked into the house that seemed lifeless.
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos