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Capitulation Part II
Tina
Quick. Its amazing how quickly you can dissolve 7 years.
Shane
You didnt dissolve 7 years, you just dissolved some technicalities.
Tina
(looks into her coffee cup as if looking for answers)
I cant believe that it ended this way, signing papers at a lawyers office. (Looks up at Shane). Why did she want it over so quickly? Does she want to move on that badly?
Shane
No, man, I guess she thought that was what you wanted, that it would be easier on you that way.
Tina
(bitterly)
Now she cares about what I want?
Shane
(leans toward Tina and reaches out to take her hand. Speaks with a voice of concern)
Tina, why dont you talk to Bette? She is the only one who can give you the answers you want.
Tina
Given the way she handled this, I dont think she wants to talk to me.
Shane
I bet she wants to talk to you more than you could ever know. Maybe shes just scared, you know?
Tina
(looks thoughtfully)
Maybe.
(Kit exits from the office and approaches the table. She is wearing reading glasses)
Kit
(as she sits down)
Woo eee, who knew there was so much to learn about this place. If I read anymore numbers I might go blind.
Tina
(turns to face Kit)
Um, Kit, have you talked to Bette lately?
Kit
Not this week. I called a couple of times, but I just got her voice mail and Ive been kinda busy with this place.
Have you tried to talk to her?
Tina
No
Kit
Maybe you should. I bet shed be real happy to hear from you.
Tina
Maybe.
INT: THE PLANET: DAY
(Dana, Alice and Shane are sitting at a table with cups in front of them. Alice and Shane are looking at magazines.)
Dana
So, has like anybody heard from Bette? Hasnt it been a week since the divorce and I havent seen her at all.
Alice
She still isnt talking to anybody. I guess it is part of her totally capitulating.
Dana
Has Tina tried to call her? I mean, sometimes you have to deal with capitulating. There can be consequences for capitulating too much.
Alice
I dont know. She was pretty busy yesterday moving the last of her stuff into her apartment.
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(47 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Ok so you have done it again…first emails back and forth, now Capitulation…and what a title…I hope you continue with this….you are doing a great….EXCELLENT…job…bravo
Damn…this one almost had me in tear…how can things get so fucked up?
Great update, but poor Bette and her Poo Sandwitches……:)-
I really like the script format. Thanks for capturing the nuance of the scene.
damn im on the verge of crying right now, it is soooo emotional. plz more
excellent story! thank you for writing it :)
seems i’m not the only one tonight whose life’s fucked up. It’s nice, in a weird way… But if theirs doesn’t get fixed (this being fiction), how can i expect mine to get better? Great chapter, and I’ll be waiting for the next one, hoping that in a few chapters, happiness’ll come around :)
What can I say, save, I liked it a lot, format and all.
It hell when you can get upset ove a F/F For a years we have laugh cryed and seen death broken heart wrecks you name it and your all have taken us there. Guess what I still love to read Fan Fiction. Now we are back to a broken heart. Love it thanks
Wow this is bad, Bette and Tina is divorced now and Tina now going out with Helena and now Bette is alone and lonely and hurt so bad. Anyway please post soon the next one soon, thank you! Great chapter!
I think my heart just broke over fictional characters. How can that happen…oh yeah, when the writing is as wonderful as yours. Thank you.