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    Capitulation Part II

    Story written on March 4, 2005 by nouvelle.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52430
    Author Notes:

    A continuation of the story

    Dana
    I cant believe she hasnt even tried to talk to Bette. Maybe we should, like, invite them both to dinner but not tell them that we invited the other person.

    Shane
    Maybe we should mind our own business and let them figure this out without our interference.

    Tina
    (approaches table and sits down)
    What interference?

    Shane
    (clears throat)
    Nothing. We were just wondering if anybody had heard from Bette.

    Tina
    You mean no body has talked to her?

    Alice
    Calls just go to voice mail.

    Tina
    What about at work?

    Alice
    James just takes a message.

    Tina
    Have you been to the house?

    Alice
    Not since the day you found out from your lawyer that she was capitulating. She made it pretty clear that night that she didnt want to talk.

    Tina
    So, you mean that for more than a week, not one person has seen or heard from Bette?

    Alice, Shane, Dana
    Uh-huh

    Shane
    (looking at Tina)
    Have you tried?

    Tina
    (looks as if she is about to cry)
    No, me either.

    EXT: BETTE AND TINAS POOL DECK: NIGHT
    Bette is, as usual, sitting on the chaise lounge with a drink on the small table next to her. She is looking down as a small piece of paper held in her hand. A tear is running down her cheek.

    Tina
    (stands at the gate)
    Bette

    Bette
    (turns to the sound of Tinas voice)
    Tina?

    Tina
    Can I come in?

    Bette
    (quickly wipes the tear from her face)
    Sure, come sit down.

    Tina
    (sits down on the chaise near Bette. Speaks nervously)
    I just came by to see how you are doing. Nobody has heard from you in a while.

    Bette
    Im okay, been busy with work and all. Can I get you something to drink?

    Tina
    No, Im fine.

    (They sit in silence for a while both looking as if they dont know what to do.)

    Bette
    So, did you find an apartment yet?

    Tina
    Yeah. Ive finally got all my stuff moved in.

    Bette
    I guess youre pretty glad to be out of Alices, huh

    Tina
    Probably not as much as she is glad to be rid of me.

    (They again lapse into uncomfortable silence)

    Bette
    Do you need anything?

    Tina
    No. The settlement was more than fair. (Long pause as Tina looks down at her hands). Bette, can I ask you something?

    Bette
    Sure. You can ask me anything, T.

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    1. Ok so you have done it again…first emails back and forth, now Capitulation…and what a title…I hope you continue with this….you are doing a great….EXCELLENT…job…bravo

    7. seems i’m not the only one tonight whose life’s fucked up. It’s nice, in a weird way… But if theirs doesn’t get fixed (this being fiction), how can i expect mine to get better? Great chapter, and I’ll be waiting for the next one, hoping that in a few chapters, happiness’ll come around :)

    9. It hell when you can get upset ove a F/F For a years we have laugh cryed and seen death broken heart wrecks you name it and your all have taken us there. Guess what I still love to read Fan Fiction. Now we are back to a broken heart. Love it thanks

    10. Wow this is bad, Bette and Tina is divorced now and Tina now going out with Helena and now Bette is alone and lonely and hurt so bad. Anyway please post soon the next one soon, thank you! Great chapter!

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