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Moving On Chapter 32
They figured that they could talk in the morning; right now all they wantedall they needed, was to love each other like no one else in the world ever could
Tbc
Chapter 32
The two women continued to make love throughout the night, until exhaustion finally took over and after 5 long.. painful years, both women fell into a deep sleep, wrapped in each others arms, totally contented and in love
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The next day as the morning rays of sun crept through the room, Tina was the first to wake, her eyes remaining closed as she felt a total sense of calm and contentment overtake her mind, body and soul.
A genuine illuminating smile graced her lips as she just lay there, motionless, for a few minutes thinking; recalling the incredible night her and Bette had just shared, how much they had both gone through to get to this point, and how alive Bette still had the ability to make her feel; thankful for being given that second chance with the love of her life with her family, after all the years that had passed them by.
Tina felt the coolness of the morning air, breeze over her, snapping her out of her insightful daze and the realization occurred to her that Bettes warm body was no longer wrapped in her own, keeping her snug. Tina wasnt concerned however, she could feel Bette there with her..sense that she was close by.
Longing to hold Bette in her arms again. forever if it were possible, Tina smiled and tried to roll her satisfied, exhausted body over, to feel out her lover, her eyes remaining closed; she wasnt ready to let in the outside world just yet, wanting to bask in the memories and the evoked feelings of the previous nightthe night that made her world complete once more.
Strangely Tina found that she couldnt turn her body over; she couldnt reach out to Bette, her body was stiff and limp, she didnt seem to have control of her limps. Something was seriously wrong; this wasnt just her bodys reaction to the incredible night of love she had been subjected too. No this was much more.
Tina took a deep concerned breath, opening her eyes, her vision initially blurry; breathing in the unfamiliar sterile smell of a bed in a room that she knew was not her own..but yet she was lying in it, with no memory of how that came to be?
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(74 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
I knew it was gonna turn this way from when I read your comment about taking a different direction. Nice dream though.
MATES…YOU ARE AWESOME…AND THIS IS ONE HELL OF A TWIST…I HAVEN’T FINISHED READING THIS CHAPTER YET…BUT I HAD TO LET YOU KNOW…THAT YOU ARE BRILLIANT….BRILLIANT I SAY….SIMPLY….GOSH…I DON’T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY….I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG RIGHT ABOUT NOW…..HEHEHEHE….OKAY…HERE’S A CYBER HUG…YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF DRAMA…..
….Noooooooo! lol! ugh, im lovin’ the story!
ALRIGHT..I FINISHED READING….TINA PASSED OUT…HAHAHHAHA…..MATES DAMN GIRL YOU ARE GOOD……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS TWIST…BUT I HAVE TO SAY THAT IT IS THE BEST TWIST SO FAR ON THIS SITE….
Ok, wow mates you really know how to shock! I had no idea the story was going to take on this angle, great writing as always. Post soon. k xx
Mates…this is sure a twister – what a surprise. You have made the best stundt for the season. I must say you had us all fooled with this story…..so what happens now. Is the nightmare starting all over again for Tina. That poor girl. Let´s see where you take us now on your journey. Post real soon. Great stuff.
We’ve missed you Mates! Glad to see you’re back with a great twist may I add! Continue soon please!
Welcome back Mates, oh what the hell is just happen is that all about in Tina dream and now what is really going on. I just don’t really what really going on next because Tina pass out and how is that happen. Please post soon, thank you!
Wow, I’m so glad you’re back…. and what a way to come back!! Please post again soon? =0)
Welcome back! Talk about twists; I think you won the grand jury prize for the biggest twister on this site. Can’t wait to read more.
I love a good story…no surprise I love what you are doing here. Take a bow, that was brilliantly crafted.
Wow, what a turn around. You have opened up a world of possibilities. Great story, Mates.
What a twist! can’t wait to see next.
OMG. This has to be the best twist ever. I’m usually good at knowing something like this is coming but I really didn’t have a clue. A bizillion stars for you mates. You rock.
mates: you have us all fooled!! great story. I think you and JLO are in a league of your own. Interesting twist. I think i know is the doc – one doctor stephanie!
What is it with all these bloody cliff hangers?!? these aren’t good for my heart!!
Update soon please!!!
omg whats going on??? is she just just dreaming this or is this her reality?
Good god, Mates! You really surprised the heck out of me! Nice twist! Now I’m dying to know what happens next.
Hi Mates, OMG! this chapter has got to be the mother of all the twists that i have read…this was absolutely fantastic! An infinity of stars for you…..WOW!!!!!
Wow nice Mate. I love the twist sort of Dallas like but love it. I’m glad you’re back you always capture me with your writing Thanks
CHAPEAU!!! Incredible… I’m speechless and also impatient to read next chapter (even if I think the doctor is Stephanie). It’s a very great story.
Oh… I hope there’snt another doctor in this hospital named… Kristie???
this is most definantly the greatest twist on this site.wb and great job
Mates….you DOG…how do you do this? I’m starting all over again, what happened to the lovin’, Is it the dreaded DR PHELPS?
again, how could you do this to us? I love it!
I think the doctor is Kristy! Why else would Tina pass out?
Poor little Jack, we hardly knew ye!
Great twist–I have no idea where this is going but it’s great please continue
Great twist! I must admit, I briefly wondered how Tina’s body could be in such great shape after 5 years of coma…..I also think the doctor is Kristie. Please continue!
Boy you got me. what a twist. Fabulous. 5 stars – of course.
now this is one hell of a story. I didn’t even see that coming.
Must update soon!
oooo… dr. krissy?
love the new twist!! keep it up and post soon!!
WELL DONE BABE THIS WAS FANTASTIC I LOVED THE WAY YOU WENT AND YOU HAVE THAT HOT DR STEPH BACK IN IT NICE PLEASE POST A.S.A.P
DR. STEPHANIE!!! AHHHH… Now how do I know if this is real or not? Can I ever trust again? I miss Little Jack already, and am dying to find out whata really happened! So glad you’re back
oh my god this is so not what I expected but its great post soon please
wow mates… left me speechless, great chapter, now i hope she can hear things out and get things sorted out the right way :)
oh no….don’t tell us it’s doc Kristie? or Cristie?… I sure will faint if I’m Tina… oh no… good..oh no…GREAT story there..keep going, don’t stop, pleassssssseeeee..I’m addicted to the fanfiction already!!
Hi I have just read this whole story – right from chapter 1-32, i absolutly love this story and the direction you have taken with it, please continue.xx
I’m back and i loveeee this chapter…. Brilliantly planned out :P
on to the next…