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    Moving On Chapter 32

    Story written on March 6, 2005 by Mates4eva.
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    Tina wakes up the next morning to one hell of a surprise!

    Tina sunk into Bettes safe, warm embrace, her weak, limp arms responding to Bettes touch, wrapping loosely around Bettes slender frame.

    Bette let out a relieved sigh whispering into Tinas ear, (sincerely) Thank god Tee, I thought I lost you. Im never letting go again. EVER!! (determinedly) I dont care what I have to dowhat we have to do! tears fell freely down her cheeks as the thought of a life without Tinaa life without love, entered her mind.

    Tina pulled back from Bettes arms, staring back at Bette, trying to determine what was going on, still confused, her mind not fully comprehending the situation she was currently in.

    Tina looked back at Bette really looked into her eyes and her heart for the first time that morning and became extremely saddened and concerned. Bette looked terribleher eyes were puffy and bloodshot, her face drawn and pale, but the most worrying trait was her eyesTina looked into Bettes eyes and saw that they were dull, the passion and fire that was always contained within the eyes of Bette Porter.the woman she knew and loved, was gone.

    Only last night it was there, where had it gone? Tina bereft, thought to herself

    She looked at Bette with a look of sorrow and indecision, silently requesting some sort of an explanation. Seeing the look Bette felt the need to try to explain, but try to protect Tina at the same time.

    Bette hesitantly began, caressing Tinas hand with her smooth, soft fingers, the relief that Tina was awake and appeared to be ok abundantly evident on her face, Tee, you were

    Just as Bette was about to tell her, a bubbly, excited nurse came crashing through the doors interrupting Bette, further frustrating Tina.

    Nurse: (cheerfully) Great, Great, Great Ms Kennard youre back with us! pouring Tina a glass of water Drink this, you need to consume as much liquid as you can my dearHow are you feeling? going merrily about checking Tinas vitals.

    Tina cleared her throat, coughing loudly, dryly, the water soothing her arid, dehydrated larynx.

    Tina answered the excitable nurse, somewhat dismissively, (hoarsely) Ok I thinkconsidering! not taking her eyes from Bettes for even a moment, knowing she could and would get all the answers she wanted from Bette and her big brown soulful eyes.

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    2. MATES…YOU ARE AWESOME…AND THIS IS ONE HELL OF A TWIST…I HAVEN’T FINISHED READING THIS CHAPTER YET…BUT I HAD TO LET YOU KNOW…THAT YOU ARE BRILLIANT….BRILLIANT I SAY….SIMPLY….GOSH…I DON’T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY….I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG RIGHT ABOUT NOW…..HEHEHEHE….OKAY…HERE’S A CYBER HUG…YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF DRAMA…..

    4. ALRIGHT..I FINISHED READING….TINA PASSED OUT…HAHAHHAHA…..MATES DAMN GIRL YOU ARE GOOD……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS TWIST…BUT I HAVE TO SAY THAT IT IS THE BEST TWIST SO FAR ON THIS SITE….

    6. Mates…this is sure a twister – what a surprise. You have made the best stundt for the season. I must say you had us all fooled with this story…..so what happens now. Is the nightmare starting all over again for Tina. That poor girl. Let´s see where you take us now on your journey. Post real soon. Great stuff.

    8. Welcome back Mates, oh what the hell is just happen is that all about in Tina dream and now what is really going on. I just don’t really what really going on next because Tina pass out and how is that happen. Please post soon, thank you!

    14. OMG. This has to be the best twist ever. I’m usually good at knowing something like this is coming but I really didn’t have a clue. A bizillion stars for you mates. You rock.

    15. mates: you have us all fooled!! great story. I think you and JLO are in a league of your own. Interesting twist. I think i know is the doc – one doctor stephanie!

    19. Hi Mates, OMG! this chapter has got to be the mother of all the twists that i have read…this was absolutely fantastic! An infinity of stars for you…..WOW!!!!!

    21. CHAPEAU!!! Incredible… I’m speechless and also impatient to read next chapter (even if I think the doctor is Stephanie). It’s a very great story.
      Oh… I hope there’snt another doctor in this hospital named… Kristie???

    23. Mates….you DOG…how do you do this? I’m starting all over again, what happened to the lovin’, Is it the dreaded DR PHELPS?
      again, how could you do this to us? I love it!

    26. Great twist! I must admit, I briefly wondered how Tina’s body could be in such great shape after 5 years of coma…..I also think the doctor is Kristie. Please continue!

    31. DR. STEPHANIE!!! AHHHH… Now how do I know if this is real or not? Can I ever trust again? I miss Little Jack already, and am dying to find out whata really happened! So glad you’re back

    34. oh no….don’t tell us it’s doc Kristie? or Cristie?… I sure will faint if I’m Tina… oh no… good..oh no…GREAT story there..keep going, don’t stop, pleassssssseeeee..I’m addicted to the fanfiction already!!

    35. Hi I have just read this whole story – right from chapter 1-32, i absolutly love this story and the direction you have taken with it, please continue.xx

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