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    Moving On Chapter 32

    Story written on March 6, 2005 by Mates4eva.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52461
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    Tina wakes up the next morning to one hell of a surprise!

    For the first time that morning Tina became vaguely aware of her surroundings, feeling a hand resting on her own, knowing it was Bettes hand. She could barely speak, her mouth was parched, her throat dry and sore, Bette she whispered huskily.

    Bette immediately arose, as soon as she heard Tinas sweet voice whisper her name, and was instantly right in front of her eyes. A look of total and absolute worry consuming her entire face, (looking into Tinas eyes with love and regret) Oh my god Tee..Its ok baby, Im here. Im here. holding firmly, tightly onto Tinas hand, squeezing it like her life depended on it. Bettes free hand frantically pressing the red button, located at the side of Tinas bed.

    Tina looked intently at Bette, confusion seeping through her eyes, (whispering) WhereWhere am I Bette? What happened? Tinas voice was crackly and barely audible.

    Bette: (tenderly caressing the side of Tinas face with the back of her hand) ShhhTee, its going to be ok. I am going to take care of you baby!! Dont talk to much until the doctor arrives. Bettes eyes were quickly filling with unshed tears, her lip quivering as she spoke, she wanted desperately to maintain her composure and remain strong for Tina, but her emotions were hastily overwhelming her.

    Tina tried to respond, beginning to become panicked, seeing the intense emotion playing across Bettes face; but her voice temporarily eluded her. Doctor what the *****???. What doctor? What the ***** happened to me? Tina thought anxiously to herself.

    Bette saw the anxiety and bewilderment in Tinas eyes and immediately got thinking of a way to try to calm Tina, to put her at ease, unsure of how much information she was supposed to divulge. Bette slowly, carefully pulled Tinas weak, fragile body into her arms in a warm, caring, loving embrace.

    Bette stared lovingly into Tinas eyes, until the second that Tinas body was wrapped in her own, unsure of how Tina would respond to her gesture or her touch for that matter, not wanting to further anger or hurt her. She had to do something though, Bette couldnt just stand by and watch the woman she lovedher Tee, in so much pain and confusion.

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    2. MATES…YOU ARE AWESOME…AND THIS IS ONE HELL OF A TWIST…I HAVEN’T FINISHED READING THIS CHAPTER YET…BUT I HAD TO LET YOU KNOW…THAT YOU ARE BRILLIANT….BRILLIANT I SAY….SIMPLY….GOSH…I DON’T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY….I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG RIGHT ABOUT NOW…..HEHEHEHE….OKAY…HERE’S A CYBER HUG…YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF DRAMA…..

    4. ALRIGHT..I FINISHED READING….TINA PASSED OUT…HAHAHHAHA…..MATES DAMN GIRL YOU ARE GOOD……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS TWIST…BUT I HAVE TO SAY THAT IT IS THE BEST TWIST SO FAR ON THIS SITE….

    6. Mates…this is sure a twister – what a surprise. You have made the best stundt for the season. I must say you had us all fooled with this story…..so what happens now. Is the nightmare starting all over again for Tina. That poor girl. Let´s see where you take us now on your journey. Post real soon. Great stuff.

    8. Welcome back Mates, oh what the hell is just happen is that all about in Tina dream and now what is really going on. I just don’t really what really going on next because Tina pass out and how is that happen. Please post soon, thank you!

    14. OMG. This has to be the best twist ever. I’m usually good at knowing something like this is coming but I really didn’t have a clue. A bizillion stars for you mates. You rock.

    15. mates: you have us all fooled!! great story. I think you and JLO are in a league of your own. Interesting twist. I think i know is the doc – one doctor stephanie!

    19. Hi Mates, OMG! this chapter has got to be the mother of all the twists that i have read…this was absolutely fantastic! An infinity of stars for you…..WOW!!!!!

    21. CHAPEAU!!! Incredible… I’m speechless and also impatient to read next chapter (even if I think the doctor is Stephanie). It’s a very great story.
      Oh… I hope there’snt another doctor in this hospital named… Kristie???

    23. Mates….you DOG…how do you do this? I’m starting all over again, what happened to the lovin’, Is it the dreaded DR PHELPS?
      again, how could you do this to us? I love it!

    26. Great twist! I must admit, I briefly wondered how Tina’s body could be in such great shape after 5 years of coma…..I also think the doctor is Kristie. Please continue!

    31. DR. STEPHANIE!!! AHHHH… Now how do I know if this is real or not? Can I ever trust again? I miss Little Jack already, and am dying to find out whata really happened! So glad you’re back

    34. oh no….don’t tell us it’s doc Kristie? or Cristie?… I sure will faint if I’m Tina… oh no… good..oh no…GREAT story there..keep going, don’t stop, pleassssssseeeee..I’m addicted to the fanfiction already!!

    35. Hi I have just read this whole story – right from chapter 1-32, i absolutly love this story and the direction you have taken with it, please continue.xx

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