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    Moving On Chapter 32

    Story written on March 6, 2005 by Mates4eva.
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    Tina wakes up the next morning to one hell of a surprise!

    One by one they all approached Tina and excitedly hugged her, crowding around the bed.

    Alice was the first to speak, So Tina, how are you feeling sweetie. You had us incredibly worried you knowAre you in much pain? Alice continued to talk, to question, but Tina wasnt really listening, her gaze fixed on Bette, the two of them totally oblivious to anyone really being in the room.

    Alice: HelloTina, Bette!! VisitorsHELLO!! Alice snapped them out of their intense gaze by pinching Bette.

    Bette: OW. Al, what the *****? Bette realized the gang were staring at them both.

    Tina: (tentatively smiling) Sorry Al, Umyes I am feeling okA little tired and sore but ok!

    Bette: (politely) ListenTina and I need to talk you guys. Would you mind giving us a few minutes?

    Alice: (protectively) Is that what you want Tina? wanting to make sure her friend was comfortable with Bette and the current situation. Knowing by the looks Bette and Tina were engaging in that the question was pointless, but feeling like she needed to ask it anyway!

    Bette glared over at Alice angrily, with a look that said mind your own business!! Alice in turn just shrugged her shoulders and glanced over at Tina.

    Tina smiled at the concern her friend showed, Yes Al. Thanks

    Alice: Ok then, well just be right outside!

    Bettes anger quickly dissipated after Tinas answer and she looked over calmly at Alice, Ok, Thanks Al!

    The girls all wandered over and gave Tina a light hug, before they left, each letting her know, in their own way that they cared. that they were there!

    Alice: You take it easy and let me know if you need anything ok Tina(looking intently in Tinas tired eyes) anything at all ok!!!

    Tina: (smiling warmly) Sure thanks Al.

    Shane: (coolly) Glad youre ok dude!

    Tina: (winking at Shane in understanding) Thanks Shane!

    Dana: Im so happy youre ok Tina! (sorrowfully) GodI dont know what we wouldve done without you!

    Tina: (smiling warmly) Awthanks Dana! You dont need to worry about that ok.

    Kit: (giving Tina a tight warm hug) You take care baby girl, and make sure my lil sister looks after you ok(whispering) Shes been miserable without you T!

    Tina whispered back in Kits ear, (honestly) So have I Kitso have I, but I dont know whats going on with us just yet!!!

    Kit: I understand hugging Tina tightly one last time, winking at Bette before all the girls left the room.

    As her friendsNO, as her family left, Tina couldnt help but grin from ear to ear, feeling incredibly lucky to have so many people in her life who love and care for herincluding the woman she was staring at, the woman sitting right next to her, forlornly staring right back at her.

    Just as the girls were exiting the room Tinas doctor entered, an inviting, contagious grin spreading over her face, aimed at one Ms Tina Kennard.

    Tinas eyes remained fixated on Bette, her mind still in a muddle of scepticism. Regaining her strength and composure, Tina looked up at the striking doctor, for the first time, just as she was introducing herself, locking eyes with the somewhat familiar face.

    Doctor: Hey TinaTina Kennard, Im so glad youre awake. It was touch and go for a while there. You certainly are one ***** of a fighter. Im Dr.. extending her hand inviting Tina to shake it.

    Tinas face went as pale as a ghost, as she interrupted, (confusion and disbelief washing over her face) I knowOh My God, its youits really you? is all she could shakily whisper before the world around her once again went black, and Tina passed out, cold!!

    Tbc

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    2. MATES…YOU ARE AWESOME…AND THIS IS ONE HELL OF A TWIST…I HAVEN’T FINISHED READING THIS CHAPTER YET…BUT I HAD TO LET YOU KNOW…THAT YOU ARE BRILLIANT….BRILLIANT I SAY….SIMPLY….GOSH…I DON’T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY….I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG RIGHT ABOUT NOW…..HEHEHEHE….OKAY…HERE’S A CYBER HUG…YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF DRAMA…..

    4. ALRIGHT..I FINISHED READING….TINA PASSED OUT…HAHAHHAHA…..MATES DAMN GIRL YOU ARE GOOD……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS TWIST…BUT I HAVE TO SAY THAT IT IS THE BEST TWIST SO FAR ON THIS SITE….

    6. Mates…this is sure a twister – what a surprise. You have made the best stundt for the season. I must say you had us all fooled with this story…..so what happens now. Is the nightmare starting all over again for Tina. That poor girl. Let´s see where you take us now on your journey. Post real soon. Great stuff.

    8. Welcome back Mates, oh what the hell is just happen is that all about in Tina dream and now what is really going on. I just don’t really what really going on next because Tina pass out and how is that happen. Please post soon, thank you!

    14. OMG. This has to be the best twist ever. I’m usually good at knowing something like this is coming but I really didn’t have a clue. A bizillion stars for you mates. You rock.

    15. mates: you have us all fooled!! great story. I think you and JLO are in a league of your own. Interesting twist. I think i know is the doc – one doctor stephanie!

    19. Hi Mates, OMG! this chapter has got to be the mother of all the twists that i have read…this was absolutely fantastic! An infinity of stars for you…..WOW!!!!!

    21. CHAPEAU!!! Incredible… I’m speechless and also impatient to read next chapter (even if I think the doctor is Stephanie). It’s a very great story.
      Oh… I hope there’snt another doctor in this hospital named… Kristie???

    23. Mates….you DOG…how do you do this? I’m starting all over again, what happened to the lovin’, Is it the dreaded DR PHELPS?
      again, how could you do this to us? I love it!

    26. Great twist! I must admit, I briefly wondered how Tina’s body could be in such great shape after 5 years of coma…..I also think the doctor is Kristie. Please continue!

    31. DR. STEPHANIE!!! AHHHH… Now how do I know if this is real or not? Can I ever trust again? I miss Little Jack already, and am dying to find out whata really happened! So glad you’re back

    34. oh no….don’t tell us it’s doc Kristie? or Cristie?… I sure will faint if I’m Tina… oh no… good..oh no…GREAT story there..keep going, don’t stop, pleassssssseeeee..I’m addicted to the fanfiction already!!

    35. Hi I have just read this whole story – right from chapter 1-32, i absolutly love this story and the direction you have taken with it, please continue.xx

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