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Brief Encounter Chapter 13
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The flight to New York at first felt longer than it should. I guess thats what it should feel like to anxiously get to a place you wanted to be. The flight attendant had been very friendly attending to my every need. And yes I do have many needs especially when flying. I dont really like going on planes, in fact if I could Id take alternate means. I was sitting near the aisle and sitting next to me near the window was a girl who looked about eighteen. She had her earphones plugged in her ear listening to her music. Yup good idea, thats what I should do.
I pulled out my iPod from my bag and untangled the earphones cable. This is what I hate; tangled earphones. Give me a break! Once my goal was achieved I plugged them in my ear and clicked on play. The chorus of a song started playing. I closed my eyes and listened to the words as they blared in my ears
`We are, we are, intrigued. We are, we are, invisible
`Oh, how we’ve shouted, how we’ve screamed
`Take notice, take interest, take me with you
`But all our fears on deaf ears
`Tonight, they’re burning the roads they built to lead us to the light
`And blinding our hearts with their shining lies
`While closing our caskets cold and tight, but I’m dying to live
These words they burned in my ear; so true of what Bette and I had; we were already in trouble even before Bettes infidelity but no one noticed it. And we kind of ignored the little signs showing how bad it had been going on If only we spotted them sooner And without realising it, I was crying softly and I felt a tear rolled down my cheek. I wiped it and opened my eyes only to find the girl next to me looking at me with questions in her eyes. I felt like such a geek. I pulled out the earphones and I smiled.
Tina: Hi, Im Tina.
She shook my hand and looked at me her eyebrow creased.
Sarah: Im Sarah. Its nice meeting you.
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Great job Thumbs..It always takes a strange to help you realize what you are missing.please post soon
I love it it’s really Beautiful Story thank you Please post soon.
Wonderful update. And a smart 16yr old. tina should listen. more please soon.
Thanks for the update Thumbs, it’s building up nicely. Have a great week away, if it’s work related don’t work too hard if not work related have loads of fun and chill and take care of those fingers!!!!
Have a good one…M
I can’t wait until Bette sees Tina!!!
This is good that someone tell Tina how much she still love Bette and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina see each other. Post soon, thank you!
Thumbs…thank you for the update. Very sweet. I just can´t wait until Bette sees Tina. And yes that Sarah must bee a smart girl to bee able to see into the future. Please don´t leave us here to long….we simply need an update. Post soon
NOOOoooooooooooo! Only Bette and Tina. Only Bette and Tina.
Sarah is a nice added character. It’ll be so tit if/when Bette mets her and also sees her talent (reassuring Tina of her love for Bette).
Can’t wait for till Tina and Bette meet again.
I hope your week away is a vacation and not work!!! Thanks for writing.
Thumbs I love this it wasn’t a transition at all it was so well put. Yes it’s funny how a complete stranger can see what’s been in front of your face for so long. Great chapter and can’t wait for the next Thanks
Superbe, as usual.I’m already waiting impatiently for the next chapter.
Thumbs this was a great chapter. Sarah gave Tina a different perspective on things and I liked that.
Oh thumbs………this is such a great story, I can’t wait until Bette sees her again
Great to see Tina has come to her senses, just hope Bette still feels the same way.Great as usual Thumbs.
From the mouths of babes. Now, on to Bette. (Well, after that work stuff that has to be done). P.S. – Tina, bring extra earrings; she might not find just one.
Hey! This was so tit! I’m glad your fingers are good. Sarah was just echoing what we’ve all been thinking…Tina go get your groove back (with Bette)!
Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Really looking forward to Tina seeing Bette and Bette seeing Tina after 3 long years. Excellent writing!
Bette…Bette…I need our Bette! Sorry sleep deprived slightly. I loved this and how a perfect stranger saw what Tina couldn’t. Excellent!
Great update. A sixteen yr old telling it like it is. loved it. Enjoy your vacation!
What a great incidental character! Sarah was a great device for helping us see Tina’s inner feelings – so much better than having her ‘dream’ or ‘reflect’
Thanks. I enjoyed the ride!
Just get them together again. not just in bed but forever.
Thanks for the incredible chapter. Can’t wait to see them together!
nice