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Brief Encounter Chapter 13
Sarah: Oh ok. So where is she now?
Tina: You dont seem to be surprised at all about it. I mean, usually
Sarah: Well my dad, well, he ummm hes hes *****. I guess thats why hes staying in LA. Everyone is more open about it.
Tina: Are you open about it?
Sarah: Yeah I mean, as long as hes happy You know what Im saying?
Tina: I understand perfectly!
Sarah: Ok so you two you just fell apart?!?
Tina: Yes. Why?
Sarah: Oh nothing Sorry to hear that.
Tina: Its alright. That was three years ago.
Sarah: Did you did you have any kids?
Tina: We tried to have a baby. But I miscarried. And it was a very hard time for us both.
I stayed quiet. Yes it was a very hard time for us both. I was alone. And Bette, she was trying as hard as she could to be strong for the both of us. And with the amount of time Provocations needed her, she stayed longer hours at the CAC than to tend to my needs. But then I guess we both place little time for the other.
Sarah: You still love her dont you?
Tina: Im sorry?
Sarah: I could tell you still have very strong feelings for her.
I smiled. Do I?
Tina: I guess…
Sarah: Well, I know you do. I remember when my dad left my mom. I knew they love each other still but they just couldnt be together anymore. Both werent happy in the marriage. At first I was so mad at them both. Like why couldnt they just stay together, you know? And why do I have to choose between them? But in the end I understood. I understood that they couldnt be together. They were much better apart than they are together. And much happier at that.
Tina: How old were you when they got divorced?
Sarah: I was twelve.
Tina: And now you are
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(50 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Great job Thumbs..It always takes a strange to help you realize what you are missing.please post soon
I love it it’s really Beautiful Story thank you Please post soon.
Wonderful update. And a smart 16yr old. tina should listen. more please soon.
Thanks for the update Thumbs, it’s building up nicely. Have a great week away, if it’s work related don’t work too hard if not work related have loads of fun and chill and take care of those fingers!!!!
Have a good one…M
I can’t wait until Bette sees Tina!!!
This is good that someone tell Tina how much she still love Bette and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina see each other. Post soon, thank you!
Thumbs…thank you for the update. Very sweet. I just can´t wait until Bette sees Tina. And yes that Sarah must bee a smart girl to bee able to see into the future. Please don´t leave us here to long….we simply need an update. Post soon
NOOOoooooooooooo! Only Bette and Tina. Only Bette and Tina.
Sarah is a nice added character. It’ll be so tit if/when Bette mets her and also sees her talent (reassuring Tina of her love for Bette).
Can’t wait for till Tina and Bette meet again.
I hope your week away is a vacation and not work!!! Thanks for writing.
Thumbs I love this it wasn’t a transition at all it was so well put. Yes it’s funny how a complete stranger can see what’s been in front of your face for so long. Great chapter and can’t wait for the next Thanks
Superbe, as usual.I’m already waiting impatiently for the next chapter.
Thumbs this was a great chapter. Sarah gave Tina a different perspective on things and I liked that.
Oh thumbs………this is such a great story, I can’t wait until Bette sees her again
Great to see Tina has come to her senses, just hope Bette still feels the same way.Great as usual Thumbs.
From the mouths of babes. Now, on to Bette. (Well, after that work stuff that has to be done). P.S. – Tina, bring extra earrings; she might not find just one.
Hey! This was so tit! I’m glad your fingers are good. Sarah was just echoing what we’ve all been thinking…Tina go get your groove back (with Bette)!
Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Really looking forward to Tina seeing Bette and Bette seeing Tina after 3 long years. Excellent writing!
Bette…Bette…I need our Bette! Sorry sleep deprived slightly. I loved this and how a perfect stranger saw what Tina couldn’t. Excellent!
Great update. A sixteen yr old telling it like it is. loved it. Enjoy your vacation!
What a great incidental character! Sarah was a great device for helping us see Tina’s inner feelings – so much better than having her ‘dream’ or ‘reflect’
Thanks. I enjoyed the ride!
Just get them together again. not just in bed but forever.
Thanks for the incredible chapter. Can’t wait to see them together!
nice