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Brief Encounter Chapter 13
Tina: You too, Sarah.
Sarah: Can I ask you something?
She looked so sweet I couldnt turn her down.
Tina: Sure go ahead.
Sarah: Why were you crying?
Tina: (Smiling sheepishly) Just that this trip had been an emotional one for me and (pointing to my ear) the song it just pictures everything perfectly.
Sarah: Oh I see. What kind of music do you have in your iPod? Ive got mostly R&B and Hip Hop stuff.
I pulled out the earphones from my ears.
Tina: R&B and Hip Hop?
Sarah: Yeah you know the likes of P. Diddy and Jay-Z stuff.
Tina: Oh ok. I dont really listen to their songs. I have Feist, Damien Rice and a few others
Sarah: Oh I see. Well, Hip Hop is whack man! You should have a listen sometime.
Tina: Whack? (I chuckled at how she described their music)
Sarah: Yeah, whack Rad! Awesome you know?
Tina: Yeah. Well wed say its *****!
Sarah: *****?
Tina: Yeah, *****.
Sarah: Okay So what are you doing flying to New York?
Tina: Im on a business trip. And Im thinking of going to my friends show tomorrow night. What about you?
Sarah: Oh Im just going back home. I was visiting my dad in LA. Theyre divorced. My mom remarried a pretty successful Investment Banker. So we live with him. Just the three of us.
Tina: Oh I see
Sarah: So are you married?
Tina: (Smiling) I used to be
Sarah: Can I ask what happened?
Tina: You ask a lot of questions dont you? But Im going to answer them since you look like a sweet girl.
Sarah: Thank you.
Tina: Well, I was married for seven years and it had been a great seven years. But the seventh year we were together we fell apart and it was the end of us. We just couldnt be together anymore.
Sarah: Where is he now?
I smiled.
Tina: Well, its actually a she
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(50 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Great job Thumbs..It always takes a strange to help you realize what you are missing.please post soon
I love it it’s really Beautiful Story thank you Please post soon.
Wonderful update. And a smart 16yr old. tina should listen. more please soon.
Thanks for the update Thumbs, it’s building up nicely. Have a great week away, if it’s work related don’t work too hard if not work related have loads of fun and chill and take care of those fingers!!!!
Have a good one…M
I can’t wait until Bette sees Tina!!!
This is good that someone tell Tina how much she still love Bette and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina see each other. Post soon, thank you!
Thumbs…thank you for the update. Very sweet. I just can´t wait until Bette sees Tina. And yes that Sarah must bee a smart girl to bee able to see into the future. Please don´t leave us here to long….we simply need an update. Post soon
NOOOoooooooooooo! Only Bette and Tina. Only Bette and Tina.
Sarah is a nice added character. It’ll be so tit if/when Bette mets her and also sees her talent (reassuring Tina of her love for Bette).
Can’t wait for till Tina and Bette meet again.
I hope your week away is a vacation and not work!!! Thanks for writing.
Thumbs I love this it wasn’t a transition at all it was so well put. Yes it’s funny how a complete stranger can see what’s been in front of your face for so long. Great chapter and can’t wait for the next Thanks
Superbe, as usual.I’m already waiting impatiently for the next chapter.
Thumbs this was a great chapter. Sarah gave Tina a different perspective on things and I liked that.
Oh thumbs………this is such a great story, I can’t wait until Bette sees her again
Great to see Tina has come to her senses, just hope Bette still feels the same way.Great as usual Thumbs.
From the mouths of babes. Now, on to Bette. (Well, after that work stuff that has to be done). P.S. – Tina, bring extra earrings; she might not find just one.
Hey! This was so tit! I’m glad your fingers are good. Sarah was just echoing what we’ve all been thinking…Tina go get your groove back (with Bette)!
Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Really looking forward to Tina seeing Bette and Bette seeing Tina after 3 long years. Excellent writing!
Bette…Bette…I need our Bette! Sorry sleep deprived slightly. I loved this and how a perfect stranger saw what Tina couldn’t. Excellent!
Great update. A sixteen yr old telling it like it is. loved it. Enjoy your vacation!
What a great incidental character! Sarah was a great device for helping us see Tina’s inner feelings – so much better than having her ‘dream’ or ‘reflect’
Thanks. I enjoyed the ride!
Just get them together again. not just in bed but forever.
Thanks for the incredible chapter. Can’t wait to see them together!
nice