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    That Early Mourning

    Story written on May 9, 2005 by JuHa72.
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    Bette ends up on Tina’s porch after Melvin dies.

    As Bette stood frozen in Tinas arms the only word she seemed to be able to mumble was, Daddy. Over and over through her sobs she cried the word, daddy. The anguish erupting within Bette was almost too much physically for Tina to handle.

    Tina released Bette from her tight embrace and placed her hands on her tear stained face. Tina lovingly and gently started to wipe away Bettes tears. She quietly whispered, Come on baby, lets go inside. As Tina led Bettes zombie like body through her apartment, she grabbed a box of tissue and led her towards the sofa. Tina sat down first and motioned for Bette to come and lay her head on her shoulder. With such love in her voice Tina managed to mutter the following words through her own tears, Come here baby, let me hold you. Without hesitation Bette say down next to Tina and buried her weak self into the arms of the only woman she has ever really loved.

    As much as Bettes heart ached at the moment, she gathered great comfort from being near Tina . . . next to Tina . . . loved by Tina. Tina slowly caressed Bettes beautiful brown locks, as Bettes body shook from her sobs and as she wailed in grief. Tina couldnt help but sob with Bette. Tina quietly said, Cry all you want baby, I am not going anywhere . . . just let it all out. Bette felt so safe, so secure not only in Tinas arms, but in her presence. As Bette started to release more of the grief that was present in her soul, Tina tenderly caressed Bettes body, only stopping now and then to wipe away tears and to kiss her forehead. Even though Tina felt so helpless, she couldnt fight the fact that holding Bette in her arms just felt so right.

    After several hours, which to Bette seemed like only a few minutes, Bette finally started to relax from her grief stricken state. Her breathing became natural and her tears began to dry up. The moment from realizing that her daddy had breathed his last breath, to finding herself in Tinas arms, were all but a blur to her. As she started to retrace those moments in her mind, she realized that she left Kit all by herself back at the house. When she realized Melvin had died, she had to leave and just couldnt deal with the details of the moment. For the first time in her life she acted like the baby sister instead of portraying the big sister role to Kit. She ran away, instead of being the responsible one. As she started to awaken from this almost out of body emotional meltdown, she sudden sat straight up and whispered, Kit. Even though her one word sentence wouldnt have made sense to the average individual, Tina knew that Bette was concerned about Kit.

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    4. Wow, great job. Interesting writing. It would be nice if B & T ever get some tyme to have deep heartfelt conversations about their feelings for each other and the breakup — before and after.

    9. WELL DONE!! Geez, first time writer?! You’re like a pro arready=) Totally loved it! Such a heartfelt story…Please update soon please!

    13. This was excellent. I am straving for more romantic, loving and intimate storylines. I have grown tried of stories that offer no romance and only crude meaningless sex. I hope you continue with this, I enjoyed it tremendously. Thank you.

    14. Sniff Sniff I’m crying I can feel my hearths it’s like to Explode Whoa!Whoa! this is really Beautiful Story Thank you Juha Please Post soon.

    23. well now if this isn’t the most beautiful and loving thing I read…gosh you wrote them so well in this and omg it was so adorable and loving…tibette together again what more could you ask for

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