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That Early Mourning
Tina took this cue from Bette and asked, Bette, do you want me to call and check on Kit? Bette for the first time since arriving at the apartment looked into Tinas eyes. Bette knew at that moment, that despite everything that had transpired between the two of them over the past few months, Tina still loved her. Bette could see the love Tina had for her reflected in her eyes. Bette swallowed hard and muttered, yes, please . . . I . . . I . . . just left . . . Tina put her finger over Bettes lips and said, Shhh . . . I will call her right now. Stay right here and I will go check on her for you. Dont worry, okay? I know Kit will understand why you had to leave. Bette continued to look deep into Tinas eyes and with a warm smile and a raspy voice uttered, thank you.
Tina made her way over to her phone and dialed the number to their house. After the third ring she recognized Shanes voice as she said, Hello, Porter Residence.
Tina: Shane, its Tina. Is Kit there?
Shane: Yeah, Dana, Alice and I are here with her. Have you seen or heard from Bette?
Tina: Yeah, shes here with me.
Shane: The coroner just came and picked up the body and Alice called hospice to come and pick up Melvins bed and medical equipment. Kit thought it might be easier on Bette if she didnt have to deal with those details or sights when she came back home.
Tina: We could not ask for better friends than you guys. Thank you so much for being there for Kit . . . (as Tina looks over to Bettes lifeless body on the couch) . . . for us.
(Having realized that for the first time in months she just used the terms we and us as if her and Bette were a couple, she struggled to find the words to continue her conversation with Shane).
Shane: (After a long pause) Tina, you know you are our family. There is no other place we would want to be right now. We are here for you guys. Anything you need, just say the word, ok?
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(54 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Nice thoughts. Thanks for sharing this.
That was very well done. Thanks!
I hope that is how the dhow goes…Thanks for this post.
Wow, great job. Interesting writing. It would be nice if B & T ever get some tyme to have deep heartfelt conversations about their feelings for each other and the breakup — before and after.
That was so sweet. They really belong together.
This was absolutely lovely to read. Please continue
good writing..plz continue
This certainly didn’t read like a first go at writing. It was very good. If you write more I’ll be here!
WELL DONE!! Geez, first time writer?! You’re like a pro arready=) Totally loved it! Such a heartfelt story…Please update soon please!
Great! I’m loving it! Thanks
very good!! Feel free to share more with us:))))
simply outstanding.. the dialogue was perfect & captured all the emiotional aspects of each situation. *****
This was excellent. I am straving for more romantic, loving and intimate storylines. I have grown tried of stories that offer no romance and only crude meaningless sex. I hope you continue with this, I enjoyed it tremendously. Thank you.
Sniff Sniff I’m crying I can feel my hearths it’s like to Explode Whoa!Whoa! this is really Beautiful Story Thank you Juha Please Post soon.
wow, that was so emotional (sniff sniff). I hope you continue with this. Again WOW!
OMG..thats a transcript for the next epi?..lol..very very beautiful full of emotions..please post as soon as you can
Emotional. Good Job.
This was really great, thank you for writing it., i hope you continue.
wow that was powerful.. i really loved it and i hope you continue.. great job!!
Oh my gosh I LOVE YOU MEN!!! That was some deep shit MEN! You gotta try this again….
that was so good,very real.
Damn this story is awesome and wonderful, love it. Post soon, thank you!
well now if this isn’t the most beautiful and loving thing I read…gosh you wrote them so well in this and omg it was so adorable and loving…tibette together again what more could you ask for