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    And Then There Were None, Ch. 6

    Story written on May 24, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    And then there were four…

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    Its Helena, Bette said confidently, drumming her fingers on the table.

    How so? Tina asked.

    It is. Look at her. It just is, I cant explain it, Bette insisted, turning her head to eye the pile of guns on the shelf, considering reclaiming hers. She squashed the idea when she saw Helena and Shane return.

    We were just talking about the virtues of being a strong-bladdered woman, right, Bette? Tina said, laughing weakly. She stopped suddenly. Wheres Alice?

    Helena looked away, and Shanes shoulders slumped.

    Bette leaned forward and buried her face in her hands. *****.

    Tina ran a hand through her hair. Okay, lets put all our cards on the table, so to speak.

    Helena glanced at her, not quite getting it. Cards?

    Our evidence, Shane supplied. And thats a good idea.

    First up, Bette announced, is Helena Peabody.

    Bette, Tina said warningly.

    What? We have to start somewhere. Why not with her? Everyone state your evidence against her, Bette replied. Ill begin. First of all, we dont know her very well. Second of all, this whole thing was set up using her mother as a ruse. Thirdly, she paused. *****, is it my third or fourth point Im making? I lost count. And is thirdly a word? Anyway, my next piece of evidence against her is that she was here before any of the rest of us were, and we dont even know how long she was here for. And my last evidence is that shes a blood-sucking, puppy-eating monster. Bette leaned back, looking satisfied.

    Helena rolled her eyes. Feel better now? Because now we can talk about the evidence against you.

    Were not done with you yet. Theres also the fact that at first, you were so adamant on insisting everything was an accident, and no foul play was involved. Bette gestured to Shane. Your turn.

    Well, Shane began slowly, looking thoughtfully. Bettes first few points were good ones. Also, she was alone with Mark when he got killed.

    And, Tina added suddenly, it was a little strange you volunteered to use the bathroom when Alice had to go. Maybe you went to make sure the job was finished.

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    1. oh shit..this is so good…and i don’t do murder mysteries…i think its like one of the old tv shows…where they all die but they all live in the end… i don’t know…please we need the end…soon

    5. That first part was so cruel! lol First I screamed out “Noooooo!” then “She’s Alive!!!!” and then…you went and killed her a second time. Evilness, but fun evil. Marina and/or her scary husband!

    7. shit, i’m getting scared just reading this. very suspenseful. i have no clue who the killer(s)is. i wasn’t sure if this was something i wanted to read but i’m glad i continued. just a guess but maybe tina’s real parents died and the killers are the fake ones. but don’t know why they would want to kill the gang.

    8. This is good. I think the killer is Tim. He is killing all the people that he thinks changed Jenny. I think, I don’t know. Ok, maybe not. Just guessing.

    10. Yeah, well, frankly I’m mostly laughing, but I’ve encased reality in a bubble and am really quite enjoying this. I still think it’s Marina, but let’s look at all the mentally unstable characters… Marcus Allenwood’s Whacko Asian Girlfriend, Lacey I Stalked Shane for Several Days… Jenny (well, rule her out – crushed by a boulder)… Marina Suicide Lady… Tonya the Cat Killer, Helena I Am Obsessed with Pregnant Lesbians…

      All current flimsy circumstantial evidence/guessing points to Marina and Helena, but I still maintain Colonel Mustard or Melissa Rivers is the Evil Doer![Insert Scary Music Soundtrack]

      Helena as “a blood-sucking, puppy-eating monster”. That’s GOLD, baby.

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