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And Then There Were None, Ch. 6
Yeah, and you didnt even go to the bathroom, Shane put in.
Well, what was I supposed to do? Helena demanded. Step over Alices dead body and sit in her blood while I pissed?
Tina winced slightly, and Helena felt a flicker of regret at her choice of words. Fine, then, lets move onto Shane, Helena stated, pointing dramatically at the thin woman.
Shane nodded obligingly as Helena began bringing up her evidence. You keep taking charge. You could be leading us into a trap, or setting us up to do what you want to with us. And dont forget, you also volunteered to go to the restroom when you didnt even have to go.
Thats right, she did, Bette admitted, eyeing Shane slowly.
You were also separated from both me and Mark for awhile when the search was going on, so you could have just as easily as killed him, Helena continued.
Wait just a ***** minute, Shane interrupted. I couldnt have killed Dana, because I was with you.
Helena paused, stumped. Ah, yes, but you could have rigged up something to kill her.
Shane rolled her eyes, moving her hands in the hurry up motion. Continue.
You know what, Shane? I move we consider the evidence against Bette now, instead, Helena said.
Wait a minute, I just thought of something else, Tina suddenly spoke up. When we got the guns, Helena handed them out. She could have decided who to give the one with blanks to.
Who got that one? Bette asked.
Dana, Helena stated.
Bettes head swiveled around. See?
No, its not like that, Helena scoffed. She turned to Shane. Remember when we heard those shots right before Dana died? Think of how many we heard. At least seven. Yet, Dana had only been shot three times, and there were no bullet holes in the hallway, and none of us has any bullet holes in us.
Bette leaned back. Shes right, she admitted grudgingly.
And you know what else? Helena asked, raising an eyebrow. This is getting us nowhere. All its doing is making us more suspicious of one another and wasting time.
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(40 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
oh shit..this is so good…and i don’t do murder mysteries…i think its like one of the old tv shows…where they all die but they all live in the end… i don’t know…please we need the end…soon
I don’t know if I’m suppose to laugh or be serious. Either way it’s good writing.
CLUE!!!!
“I gotta go now. I’m gonna see Dana.” First fic to make me cry. Well done, damn you!
That first part was so cruel! lol First I screamed out “Noooooo!” then “She’s Alive!!!!” and then…you went and killed her a second time. Evilness, but fun evil. Marina and/or her scary husband!
Who’s the killer, I’m stumpped. WAIT, I know!!!!!!! It’s the bulter, its always the bulter.
shit, i’m getting scared just reading this. very suspenseful. i have no clue who the killer(s)is. i wasn’t sure if this was something i wanted to read but i’m glad i continued. just a guess but maybe tina’s real parents died and the killers are the fake ones. but don’t know why they would want to kill the gang.
This is good. I think the killer is Tim. He is killing all the people that he thinks changed Jenny. I think, I don’t know. Ok, maybe not. Just guessing.
I’m seriously laughing, and not sure if it’s what I’m supposed to be doing…but I’m enjoying it.
Yeah, well, frankly I’m mostly laughing, but I’ve encased reality in a bubble and am really quite enjoying this. I still think it’s Marina, but let’s look at all the mentally unstable characters… Marcus Allenwood’s Whacko Asian Girlfriend, Lacey I Stalked Shane for Several Days… Jenny (well, rule her out – crushed by a boulder)… Marina Suicide Lady… Tonya the Cat Killer, Helena I Am Obsessed with Pregnant Lesbians…
All current flimsy circumstantial evidence/guessing points to Marina and Helena, but I still maintain Colonel Mustard or Melissa Rivers is the Evil Doer![Insert Scary Music Soundtrack]
Helena as “a blood-sucking, puppy-eating monster”. That’s GOLD, baby.
getting better still who is the killer?? please post soon can’t wait to find out
Wait it’s James right? finaly getting back at the lesbians in his life LOL just kidding!!!